Stormy cloud
3-5-3 poem air2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so creative. For me it paints a picture of the intensity and warmth of love. I like how you compared it to the brilliant and captivating blaze of lightning. The underlying message that I got was that love can be both electrifying and comforting. Well done!
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Your poem is so creative. For me it paints a picture of the intensity and warmth of love. I like how you compared it to the brilliant and captivating blaze of lightning. The underlying message that I got was that love can be both electrifying and comforting. Well done!
Comment Written 05-May-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is quite a quandary. storm clouds do light up a fireplace does light up. But to suggest with love. This is a very positive view of the world. I think stormcloud is accepted and I feel goes better with a fireplace, just something to think about.
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This is quite a quandary. storm clouds do light up a fireplace does light up. But to suggest with love. This is a very positive view of the world. I think stormcloud is accepted and I feel goes better with a fireplace, just something to think about.
Comment Written 05-May-2024