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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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LOL I couldn't help but laugh. Yes, woodpeckers can be annoying when one's trying to sleep. Probably not as annoying as a barking dog. LOL Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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This poem is humorous and had me smiling. It also made me think about the things which people sometimes do that are natural or normal for them, but affect us all the same. Your colors are always very stunning and your words invoke deep thought.
RJ

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 03-Jun-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! Oh, that annoying woodpecker! And sometimes they are seeking a mate so they want to make a lot of noise and the knock on the roof or a metal rain gutter. Cute!

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
    LoL Thank you very much, big sis.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from kahpot
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Ha! Ha! how very frustrating, the woodpecker must be a fascinating bird, I think the closest we come here is the Kookaburra, they slap their food in a knocking/pecking display constantly before eating, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, kym. I heard of the Kookaburra before. Where are you from in Australia? I have a good friend in New Zealand.

    Thank you very much

    Gypsy
reply by kahpot on 02-Jun-2024
    I live in Queensland, New Zealand is considered our/ Australia's neighbor,
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, I wish I could visit, it looks beautiful in movies and pictures. (*÷*)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
    I live in Los Angeles, California
Comment from shelley kaye
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i n t e r r u p t e d n a p -
knock ... knock ... annoyed man opens door
but nobody is there ---
a woodpecker s t a r e s at him
from high in a tree...

cute woody woodpecker poem with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy