Collection of a Lifetime
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Signs"a collection of poetry and experience
8 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gansach,
An excellent, sullen poem, about the end of nature's splendor (colorful fall foliage),
that's lost to winter's chill. I like the symbolism in this poem too.
It could mean the end of an era, or the end of life itself.
Excellent poem, ganache.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Gansach,
An excellent, sullen poem, about the end of nature's splendor (colorful fall foliage),
that's lost to winter's chill. I like the symbolism in this poem too.
It could mean the end of an era, or the end of life itself.
Excellent poem, ganache.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Pine cones are a joy and I have collected many of them on my journey through life and I enjoyed your tribute to natures joys here, a fine nature poem, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Pine cones are a joy and I have collected many of them on my journey through life and I enjoyed your tribute to natures joys here, a fine nature poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written with the pinecones hanging on the pine tree. I could almost close my eyes and see the clusters of pinecones. You have described it very well and I enjoyed it very much. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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This is beautifully written with the pinecones hanging on the pine tree. I could almost close my eyes and see the clusters of pinecones. You have described it very well and I enjoyed it very much. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Signs, acknowledges that the seasons are changing and the early notifications are all around for us to see. The colors, the movements, and the feeling in the air, all say change.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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This poem, Signs, acknowledges that the seasons are changing and the early notifications are all around for us to see. The colors, the movements, and the feeling in the air, all say change.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Bill.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
You describe the coming of fall beautifully but I am just not ready for summer to end yet! Even though Fall is my favorite season. It is too short and it leads into Winter. lol Nicely done poem. lovely descriptions.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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You describe the coming of fall beautifully but I am just not ready for summer to end yet! Even though Fall is my favorite season. It is too short and it leads into Winter. lol Nicely done poem. lovely descriptions.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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I feel the same, but my summery poems for this section of the book have run out-LOL! While I love early fall, I'd like summer to last longer, too. Thanks so much for your review!
Comment from royowen
I have seen that sign many times in the past, in a pine forest, the pine cones make very good burning. Great images you have verbally painted, and the pine needles spread across the forest floor, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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I have seen that sign many times in the past, in a pine forest, the pine cones make very good burning. Great images you have verbally painted, and the pine needles spread across the forest floor, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
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A pleasure
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A pleasure
Comment from Samantha Wymer
This poem is written very well with strong words describing nature itself. All your poems are beautiful, but I really love this one. I can tell you have an open mind and can truly see the beauty all around us. Great poem.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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This poem is written very well with strong words describing nature itself. All your poems are beautiful, but I really love this one. I can tell you have an open mind and can truly see the beauty all around us. Great poem.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words.
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Your very welcome
Comment from Pamusart
Hi gansach
This is a pretty take on pinecones. The pine tree never sheds its leaves in the fall.
But it does shed Pineneedles which are leaves, and seeds from the pinecones. Those seeds are food for many many many different animals
You did an excellent job for your rhyming. That was no set meter and I thought the poem was beautiful.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
And the animals playing with the seeds plants more pine trees
Plus, I'm sure there are many nests of birds in that tree. Probably some snakes too. But snakes have to eat just like everybody else. They go after the eggs mostly
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Hi gansach
This is a pretty take on pinecones. The pine tree never sheds its leaves in the fall.
But it does shed Pineneedles which are leaves, and seeds from the pinecones. Those seeds are food for many many many different animals
You did an excellent job for your rhyming. That was no set meter and I thought the poem was beautiful.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
And the animals playing with the seeds plants more pine trees
Plus, I'm sure there are many nests of birds in that tree. Probably some snakes too. But snakes have to eat just like everybody else. They go after the eggs mostly
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much.