Unraveled Trust
the spectre of digital infidelity5 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Betrayal in the digital age looks a little different, but at the core is no different. Emotional adultery. A well-done poem expressing the shattering of trust. An excellent entry for the prompt.
Julie
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Betrayal in the digital age looks a little different, but at the core is no different. Emotional adultery. A well-done poem expressing the shattering of trust. An excellent entry for the prompt.
Julie
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
There are different ways to fan disconnections between spouses, and the fastest and most common these days is the digital type you write about. It has destroyed many families. Thanks for writing on this topic. Good luck in the contest.
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There are different ways to fan disconnections between spouses, and the fastest and most common these days is the digital type you write about. It has destroyed many families. Thanks for writing on this topic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from Cullen T. Bridges
I appreciate the flow of the poem, and I hope this is purely a fictional work, though I've known many who find experience an easier subject to write about, especially in this context. I should say it definitely created a sense of longing for happier times before the curtain was pulled back, at least for me. Nice work!
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I appreciate the flow of the poem, and I hope this is purely a fictional work, though I've known many who find experience an easier subject to write about, especially in this context. I should say it definitely created a sense of longing for happier times before the curtain was pulled back, at least for me. Nice work!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is a poignant accounting of an all too relatable situation. You put the reader very close to the content. My favorite part, though, is the phrase, "digital embrace."
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This is a poignant accounting of an all too relatable situation. You put the reader very close to the content. My favorite part, though, is the phrase, "digital embrace."
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from Gayla putnam
This is a raw comment on breaking trust on social media. Your poem captures the hurt and betrayal in a few short stanzas. I would like to give you some critical feedback, but it is perfect the way it is written. I like the line "words not meant for me." and " the betrayal not in flesh but words." gayla
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This is a raw comment on breaking trust on social media. Your poem captures the hurt and betrayal in a few short stanzas. I would like to give you some critical feedback, but it is perfect the way it is written. I like the line "words not meant for me." and " the betrayal not in flesh but words." gayla
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024