Days of Summer
Summer Days33 total reviews
Comment from Samantha Wymer
You described mother nature perfectly in your remarkable poem. Love the interesting fact about the bees surrounding their queen to keep her warm during the winter. Very loyal little bees. Your poem is amazing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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You described mother nature perfectly in your remarkable poem. Love the interesting fact about the bees surrounding their queen to keep her warm during the winter. Very loyal little bees. Your poem is amazing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you Samantha for your lovely review as I was writing this about blossoms in the summer that made me wonder what bees do in the winter. So I looked it up and decided to relay it my notes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Pam.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote an excellent poem.
-The meter creates a smooth flow,
and the imagery and rhyme are also very good.
-I also like the style you chose with rhyming
couplets within each verse.
-A very good opening verse with effective personification.
-You create a very good word picture of the elements of summer
with many varied elements of nature.
-I like the line about the "petals wearing a gown."
-I also like loons and used to watch a web cam.
They are beautiful and have that haunting cry.
-A very good closing verse. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Pam.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote an excellent poem.
-The meter creates a smooth flow,
and the imagery and rhyme are also very good.
-I also like the style you chose with rhyming
couplets within each verse.
-A very good opening verse with effective personification.
-You create a very good word picture of the elements of summer
with many varied elements of nature.
-I like the line about the "petals wearing a gown."
-I also like loons and used to watch a web cam.
They are beautiful and have that haunting cry.
-A very good closing verse. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you Pam for such a detailed and lovely review of my poem
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great poem about summer and the summer plants and nature done in a classic poetic style really captures the mood of the summer season and the coming of the fall
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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great poem about summer and the summer plants and nature done in a classic poetic style really captures the mood of the summer season and the coming of the fall
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you Jake for a great review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the summer back to me here, the sights, the sounds and the warm breezes Pam, I am missing the summer and your poem brought back so many memories. A well written, ambient poem full of joys, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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You brought the summer back to me here, the sights, the sounds and the warm breezes Pam, I am missing the summer and your poem brought back so many memories. A well written, ambient poem full of joys, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you Dolly for a great review. You can only look forward to next summer as this summer has gone by.
Comment from Coren McGirr
Well done! Your words left me longing for summer. The picturesque style with which you write created images and smells as I read. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Well done! Your words left me longing for summer. The picturesque style with which you write created images and smells as I read. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you Coren for your lovely review
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem vividly penned the beauty and of summer. Perfectly rhymes that could go for a song. The accompanying photo adds beauty to the poem. Thanks for sharing your work. Well done, dear Pam.
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Your poem vividly penned the beauty and of summer. Perfectly rhymes that could go for a song. The accompanying photo adds beauty to the poem. Thanks for sharing your work. Well done, dear Pam.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Katiemae1977
Excellent commentary about summer. You've managed to cover it all. You have many outstanding poetic lines in this poem and your rhymes and meter are strong.
Thoroughly enjoyed this one Pam.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Excellent commentary about summer. You've managed to cover it all. You have many outstanding poetic lines in this poem and your rhymes and meter are strong.
Thoroughly enjoyed this one Pam.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you Katiemae for your wonderful review
Comment from bob cullen
Your comment about the worker bees huddling around the queen bee fascinated me. Mother Nature teaches me something new every day.
Just read this again. It truly is magnificent. Your descriptions of the journey through the day are almost visible in your words. This is poetry as it should be written and so deserving of it's six stars.
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Your comment about the worker bees huddling around the queen bee fascinated me. Mother Nature teaches me something new every day.
Just read this again. It truly is magnificent. Your descriptions of the journey through the day are almost visible in your words. This is poetry as it should be written and so deserving of it's six stars.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
Comment from Senyai
Hi Pam,
What a truly lovely poem you have penned here. Seasons changing from summer to fall is now late in coming to Texas this year. Finally we got some much needed rain and cooler weather. It's been unseasonably warm and and dry this year but now a change has finally come. Your beautiful poem is timely as it is beautiful. Lovely oleander blooms to enhance your work added so much.
Your gentle rhymes are not contrived and flow impeccably down the page. I thoroughly enjoyed this timeless poem.
Senyai
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Hi Pam,
What a truly lovely poem you have penned here. Seasons changing from summer to fall is now late in coming to Texas this year. Finally we got some much needed rain and cooler weather. It's been unseasonably warm and and dry this year but now a change has finally come. Your beautiful poem is timely as it is beautiful. Lovely oleander blooms to enhance your work added so much.
Your gentle rhymes are not contrived and flow impeccably down the page. I thoroughly enjoyed this timeless poem.
Senyai
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Senyai thank you for your beautiful and lovely review
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a gorgeous 'memory' of summer! Oh take me back, although in Ireland we had a pretty terrible summer weather wise this year! So take my to next summer and I'll hope for the best lol!
I love the scenes that you have captured, beautiful. And the little fun fact about the bee's! Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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This is a gorgeous 'memory' of summer! Oh take me back, although in Ireland we had a pretty terrible summer weather wise this year! So take my to next summer and I'll hope for the best lol!
I love the scenes that you have captured, beautiful. And the little fun fact about the bee's! Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Hi Nicki. yeah may be summer is relative because maybe Ireland doesn't have a summer. I think it does, but I think it's shorter than most everywhere else. Thank you for your lovely review.