Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Colleen Comes Calling"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! I don't think that was the reply Colleen expected! Poor Miranda, she has just been doused with two litres of Dr Pepper, and looks and feels a mess. What with no sleep, she is definitely not receptive to anything. But OMG if someone came to see me with a cheque for that amount, my smile would be brighter than the sun! Loved this chapter, Gretchen, it had lots of fun parts in it, not that Miranda would agree, and a few surprises. Very well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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LOL! I don't think that was the reply Colleen expected! Poor Miranda, she has just been doused with two litres of Dr Pepper, and looks and feels a mess. What with no sleep, she is definitely not receptive to anything. But OMG if someone came to see me with a cheque for that amount, my smile would be brighter than the sun! Loved this chapter, Gretchen, it had lots of fun parts in it, not that Miranda would agree, and a few surprises. Very well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I think Miranda is in shock. It will hit later. Lol. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Please Miranda. Take the money and run. Coleen is three kinds of stupid for doing this in a public way. Go home, clean up, go to the bank, deposit the check. You have still not read my chapter for your book. " Conventionally Yours". Karen
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Please Miranda. Take the money and run. Coleen is three kinds of stupid for doing this in a public way. Go home, clean up, go to the bank, deposit the check. You have still not read my chapter for your book. " Conventionally Yours". Karen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I will look into that. There were so many chapters coming in it was hard to keep up. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
My goodness. A fabulous chapter with very vivid details - I can picture everything so well. Sorry I am out of sixes. Had to laugh about "Thank goodness I am here to ruin that illusion." Now how long is she going to hide in that restroom? Super chapter.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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My goodness. A fabulous chapter with very vivid details - I can picture everything so well. Sorry I am out of sixes. Had to laugh about "Thank goodness I am here to ruin that illusion." Now how long is she going to hide in that restroom? Super chapter.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you Wendy. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Some things are just too much for Miranda. Two hundred and fifty thousand dollars has a nice sound, and she could certainly use it, but she can't believe her luck has so radically changed. This is so different from all Miranda's other experiences. I can't wait to see how Miranda handles this.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Some things are just too much for Miranda. Two hundred and fifty thousand dollars has a nice sound, and she could certainly use it, but she can't believe her luck has so radically changed. This is so different from all Miranda's other experiences. I can't wait to see how Miranda handles this.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol. Not sure how she'll handle this. I'm sure it will be entertaining. Gretchen
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a good issue to be discussing: ""Rita, he was hitting on you."
She frowns. "No, he was just being friendly."
"He was that. But did you notice when I said you were married, it was time to hit the road. How many times do I have to tell you sometimes friendly isn't really friendly? Sometimes its an old creep on the road trying to hit on a pretty girl."
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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This is a good issue to be discussing: ""Rita, he was hitting on you."
She frowns. "No, he was just being friendly."
"He was that. But did you notice when I said you were married, it was time to hit the road. How many times do I have to tell you sometimes friendly isn't really friendly? Sometimes its an old creep on the road trying to hit on a pretty girl."
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Rita is the opposite of Miranda. They are a good balance. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
What an interesting chapter. Very descriptive on the exploded soda bottle. I look forward to where this is going after the big check presentation. A couple of spags.The[y] trucker is smitten
dealing with things that [is](are) irritating
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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What an interesting chapter. Very descriptive on the exploded soda bottle. I look forward to where this is going after the big check presentation. A couple of spags.The[y] trucker is smitten
dealing with things that [is](are) irritating
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wonderfully humorous episode with the Dr Pepper, deserving of a post in its own right! I could feel the discomfort of that soaking! Then our anticipation of more to come but hardly expecting this jackpot of a surprise. No wonder she needed the restroom! A thoroughly enjoyable read! Debbie
(The) trucker is smitten with her
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Wonderfully humorous episode with the Dr Pepper, deserving of a post in its own right! I could feel the discomfort of that soaking! Then our anticipation of more to come but hardly expecting this jackpot of a surprise. No wonder she needed the restroom! A thoroughly enjoyable read! Debbie
(The) trucker is smitten with her
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I hate the sound of my shoes when they get something sticky on the bottom. Then the liquid as it dries would drive me crazy. Hope that came through. Lol. Thank you so much, Debbie. Gretchen
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No doubt about that!
Comment from BethShelby
Wow! that is a lot of cash. I know you need to do something about that sticky Dr. Pepper, but I have a feeling that reaction wasn't whan anyone anticipated, especially the photographer. I'm not sure where you found there so since this is part of the story I don't know. I do remember something later about a car in a lake. I hope when Miranda gets cleaned up she at least thanks them for the gesture.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Wow! that is a lot of cash. I know you need to do something about that sticky Dr. Pepper, but I have a feeling that reaction wasn't whan anyone anticipated, especially the photographer. I'm not sure where you found there so since this is part of the story I don't know. I do remember something later about a car in a lake. I hope when Miranda gets cleaned up she at least thanks them for the gesture.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Miranda found a missing man's body and that's where the reward came from. It's from the first Miranda book. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't know why it is that I don't ever have a six when I need it most. It must have something to do with all the bad things I've done throughout my life. It's paybacks. It's like standing naked to the world, so people people can point out my shortcomings, or largest mistakes.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I don't know why it is that I don't ever have a six when I need it most. It must have something to do with all the bad things I've done throughout my life. It's paybacks. It's like standing naked to the world, so people people can point out my shortcomings, or largest mistakes.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Lol. I don't worry about sixes because I often go through mine in one afternoon. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow, this is a shock and I was wondering who Ms Barkley was, glad you explained that. This is a little bit of good fortune for Miranda and she has been overcome with emotion, another fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Wow, this is a shock and I was wondering who Ms Barkley was, glad you explained that. This is a little bit of good fortune for Miranda and she has been overcome with emotion, another fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. I'm sure friends who Miranda never knew will be coming out of the woodwork. Gretchen