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Let It Snow

A 5-7-5 contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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I'm at my daughters in Florida for
the holidays...i live in Illinois....I miss
the snow...and hope to get home soon...

I love your poem...picture perfect...
very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Thank you ever so much for your review. I really appreciate your comments. xoxo
reply by l.raven on 24-Dec-2024
    you are so very welcome sweet girl...
    love xxoo
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Let It Snow, has the proper formatting and suggests, with this image, that the woodland critters are waiting for snow while standing in it.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    It supposed to encompass the whole poem- waiting for snow and the results. I do appreciate your observations and comments. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your haiku, "Let It Snow," succinctly captures the anticipation and hope of winter's arrival, evoking a sense of wonder and nostalgia. The imagery of "eyes on winter watch" is vivid, setting a scene of eager waiting. The focus on the first snowflake brings a delicate, almost magical feeling that perfectly aligns with the festive spirit of Christmas.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    I truly appreciate your review. Thank you ever so much for your comments.
reply by Peter Jarvis on 19-Dec-2024
    Take care and stay safe
reply by Peter Jarvis on 19-Dec-2024
    Bless you