Comment from
patcelaw
This is a delightful 5754 and I very much enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best in the contest and that you have a wonderful weekend. May you have a wonderful and happy and merry Christmas as well. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
Hi Patrica Thanks so much for reviewing my Haiku and the lovely stars. All the best for Christmas and New Year to you as well Cheers
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is cute and follows the syllables count. The image supports your words and adds to your piece. I found one typo.
I need to have a ride to (too)
Best wishes
Akex
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
Hi Akex Thanks for your review and lovely stars. I've been looking up info on 'to & too' as far as I understand 'to' is the correct one. Have a great Christmas and New Year
PS Just been speaking to my school teacher daughter in Perth She says too is correct meanin also. We live and learn