Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very nice. I do have one suggestion for that last line to avoid repeating the same word

notes:

All is gay and bright
Paper, bows, and shiny lights
Snow is glowing bright
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All is gay and bright
Paper, bows, and shiny lights
Snow is glowing white

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I did go in and make corrections.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written 575 for the Christmas poetry contest I wish you the very best in The contest. May you have a very blessed weekend may you also have a very good merry Christmas.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

Thank you so much!