Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great Christmas 5-7-5 poem. Jesus is the reason for the season. People have forgotten that. It is so commercialized and people go into deep debt to celebrare Santa. Sad, but true
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I felt the happiness in your words here as we celebrate the birth of Jesus in a couple of days, a fine entry for the contest and I wish you luck, Merry Christmas, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from
Lana Marie
I like this. When my kids were younger we used to bake a Happy Birthday Jesus cake, so that he wouldn't be lost in the shuffle. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024