Christmas Nightmare
The Gang Gathers15 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
For Jenna it must be worst not knowing what is happening. She is all alone with the baby, except when her mother can be there to help her. Those out at the cabin may have received a bomb, but there are enough of them to prevent an attack by just two men, unless they have called up more troops. This story has a lot of drama and action to please even the most determined action adventure reader.
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For Jenna it must be worst not knowing what is happening. She is all alone with the baby, except when her mother can be there to help her. Those out at the cabin may have received a bomb, but there are enough of them to prevent an attack by just two men, unless they have called up more troops. This story has a lot of drama and action to please even the most determined action adventure reader.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
It's the day after Christmas and I hope your Christmas was as enjoyable as you imagined it would be, and much better than your characters experienced. The stage has been set for them, and Garth is devising a plan. Doyle and Rossi are in for a fight.
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It's the day after Christmas and I hope your Christmas was as enjoyable as you imagined it would be, and much better than your characters experienced. The stage has been set for them, and Garth is devising a plan. Doyle and Rossi are in for a fight.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
Comment from Esther Brown
Carol Merry Christmas! I am so far behind I just picked up a chapter at random. Fine story, and as always very well written. Tell me, however did you manage to concieve of this dark and sinister plot twist in the glow of Christmas lights? I will catch the back story and get caught up! Esther
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Carol Merry Christmas! I am so far behind I just picked up a chapter at random. Fine story, and as always very well written. Tell me, however did you manage to concieve of this dark and sinister plot twist in the glow of Christmas lights? I will catch the back story and get caught up! Esther
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
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Happy Holidays to you, my dear friend. It's a four story writing showing Eleanor and the gang trying to celebrate Christmas Eve. Ready carefully because there are hints of what is to come when I start the new book. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a great story and the saga continues. The judge just can't be detained. He is a sneaky S.O.B. and always has something up his sleeve.
This is a great segue to your book.
Well done
Love ya lots my friend,
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is a great story and the saga continues. The judge just can't be detained. He is a sneaky S.O.B. and always has something up his sleeve.
This is a great segue to your book.
Well done
Love ya lots my friend,
Cecilia
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
Comment from Wendy G
This continuation is excellent - but now we must wait? I guess you do need time to celebrate with your family and loved ones, and I wish you a happy and blessed time as well as some physical and emotonal refreshment over the next few days.
Wendy
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This continuation is excellent - but now we must wait? I guess you do need time to celebrate with your family and loved ones, and I wish you a happy and blessed time as well as some physical and emotonal refreshment over the next few days.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another great chapter! It sounds like everyone's aware of Rossi's and Doyle's escape. Christmas will be difficult for the families of the children who were injured or killed. One small fix: '...planning their revenge, but with (whom) and at what cost?' You used much more narration in this chapter, letting us in on the characters' thoughts. Blessings. Carol
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Another great chapter! It sounds like everyone's aware of Rossi's and Doyle's escape. Christmas will be difficult for the families of the children who were injured or killed. One small fix: '...planning their revenge, but with (whom) and at what cost?' You used much more narration in this chapter, letting us in on the characters' thoughts. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
On this Christmas Eve, this sets up your intriguing story to continue in the New Year. With Rossi and Doyle now on the loose and planning revenge, no one is safe, although those stars might possibly be indicating that, with Eleanor's shining light, all may still turn out alright. Enjoy the holidays, Carol. Take care Debbie
but with who(m) and at what cost?
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On this Christmas Eve, this sets up your intriguing story to continue in the New Year. With Rossi and Doyle now on the loose and planning revenge, no one is safe, although those stars might possibly be indicating that, with Eleanor's shining light, all may still turn out alright. Enjoy the holidays, Carol. Take care Debbie
but with who(m) and at what cost?
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from karenina
Another fine post, Carol. Let me say it's been a joy reading all of your work this year and especially celebrating with you as you published your first book! I know there will be twists and turns, and I know my heart will race and sometimes swell with sadness and (more often) with joy.
All my best to you as you celebrate with your family. Now take a little break and enjoy them! (I bet you post again before the New Year though)
(smile)
Merry Christmas to you!
Karenina
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Another fine post, Carol. Let me say it's been a joy reading all of your work this year and especially celebrating with you as you published your first book! I know there will be twists and turns, and I know my heart will race and sometimes swell with sadness and (more often) with joy.
All my best to you as you celebrate with your family. Now take a little break and enjoy them! (I bet you post again before the New Year though)
(smile)
Merry Christmas to you!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
Yes, now that sounds like it may be a marvellous new year with Doyle and Rossi Om the loose, they appear to be more than a match for most of the law enforcement officers, but perhaps not too much for Eleanor and Dannii, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
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Yes, now that sounds like it may be a marvellous new year with Doyle and Rossi Om the loose, they appear to be more than a match for most of the law enforcement officers, but perhaps not too much for Eleanor and Dannii, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I read this and then my computer froze on me. Probably because those two evil guys have escaped. I am worried about my friend, but I have confidence that Garth and his gang and Matthew will keep us all safe. Maybe a few missteps, but the outcome will be good.
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I read this and then my computer froze on me. Probably because those two evil guys have escaped. I am worried about my friend, but I have confidence that Garth and his gang and Matthew will keep us all safe. Maybe a few missteps, but the outcome will be good.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024