Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Cheating Eyes"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Sankey
This has been a very good chapter. Was Tomlinson interfering with the boys at school, or just other men? I am curious about Dougie's history with Tomlinson; and did Dougie just have a slight worry about Waylon being interfered with by Tomlinson. Fill me in a bit on Dougie's history with Tomlinson. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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This has been a very good chapter. Was Tomlinson interfering with the boys at school, or just other men? I am curious about Dougie's history with Tomlinson; and did Dougie just have a slight worry about Waylon being interfered with by Tomlinson. Fill me in a bit on Dougie's history with Tomlinson. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Tomlin and Dougie were in high school together. Dougie caught Tomlin being aggressive in locker room with a younger classmate. He teased Tomlin to the point that Tomlin was publicly humiliated. So, Tomlin was a predator even in High school. Thank you for the awesome rating and glad you are still reading this. Gretchen
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Thanks for the clarification.
Comment from Sanku
Miranda did some investigation of her own and she has doubts about Dougie killing Tomlin..Mitch is equally ,rightly so , that she shouldnt interfere in the investigation Miranda being Miranda I doubt idf she will keep quiet...
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Miranda did some investigation of her own and she has doubts about Dougie killing Tomlin..Mitch is equally ,rightly so , that she shouldnt interfere in the investigation Miranda being Miranda I doubt idf she will keep quiet...
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Miranda can't help but interfere. If she behaved, I wouldn't have a story. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from pome lover
well, I've caught up. It looks like our Miranda is quite the sleuth. And Mitch missed the tire marks.
Also, I'd just like to say that I hope she keeps the money and nobody stiffs her for it. Also I hope Waylon gets to stay with Miranda. I guess there's no chance of their renting a little house??? :) As you can see, I'm all involved.
Katharine
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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well, I've caught up. It looks like our Miranda is quite the sleuth. And Mitch missed the tire marks.
Also, I'd just like to say that I hope she keeps the money and nobody stiffs her for it. Also I hope Waylon gets to stay with Miranda. I guess there's no chance of their renting a little house??? :) As you can see, I'm all involved.
Katharine
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Miranda loves her trailer. She would have a hard time letting that go. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, sometimes, we have to stand up for even jackasses when we know in our hearts they are innocent. Then, we just have to hope our hearts are right. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Yes, sometimes, we have to stand up for even jackasses when we know in our hearts they are innocent. Then, we just have to hope our hearts are right. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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I stood up for a number of Jackasses. Lol. Thank you for this awesome rating and very understanding review. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Wile
Miranda is hot on the trail now. I loved how Mitch indulged her request to see the crime scene pictures. He's really a good guy and understands Miranda very well, knowing how perceptive and intelligent she is. And much as she hates the way Dougie has turned out, she still values him as a human being and wants him to survive if for no other reason than for Waylon's sake.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Miranda is hot on the trail now. I loved how Mitch indulged her request to see the crime scene pictures. He's really a good guy and understands Miranda very well, knowing how perceptive and intelligent she is. And much as she hates the way Dougie has turned out, she still values him as a human being and wants him to survive if for no other reason than for Waylon's sake.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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She does love Waylon and knows how much he loves his father. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
Mitch is quite right about not wanting Miranda interfering in the investigation. Somehow he needs to maintain his professional stance without compromising his relationship with her. I think he handled it well. Good chapter gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Hello Gretchen,
Mitch is quite right about not wanting Miranda interfering in the investigation. Somehow he needs to maintain his professional stance without compromising his relationship with her. I think he handled it well. Good chapter gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. Several people didn't realize he left her alone with the folder on purpose. Lol. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
This is written very well and I enjoyed listening to it. It flows quite well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation. I'll make it for a very good piece to listen to. Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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This is written very well and I enjoyed listening to it. It flows quite well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation. I'll make it for a very good piece to listen to. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Patricia. I do appreciate your encouraging review. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like Mitch. He's very credible, a no-nonsense guy who does his job professionally with a little bit of leeway, knowing how important this case is to Miranda. She, meanwhile is on a roll and determined to get to the bottom of it, as we know she will. Thank you, Gretchen, for sharing this excellent chapter. Take care Debbie
(The) guy who said enough trash...
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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I like Mitch. He's very credible, a no-nonsense guy who does his job professionally with a little bit of leeway, knowing how important this case is to Miranda. She, meanwhile is on a roll and determined to get to the bottom of it, as we know she will. Thank you, Gretchen, for sharing this excellent chapter. Take care Debbie
(The) guy who said enough trash...
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Debbie. Mitch does let Miranda get away with more than he probably should, but he knows there is no stopping her. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Check the symbols in your first paragraph.
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Excellent chapter. Good composition, dialog, and character development. It's interesting to see Miranda looking out Dougie with tenderness.
The scene with Mitch is funny.
Another great chapter with good form and composition. Great character and plot development.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Check the symbols in your first paragraph.
( A'A(c)clair's )
Excellent chapter. Good composition, dialog, and character development. It's interesting to see Miranda looking out Dougie with tenderness.
The scene with Mitch is funny.
Another great chapter with good form and composition. Great character and plot development.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Gypsy. I appreciate your review and the encouraging comments. Hope you and your family are safe. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
She lives, as I do under that Chinese Blessing/Curse "may you have an interesting life". My life is rarely boring. Just when, I have my hopefully soon ex back under his rock, and quit trying to kill him legally in my stories, he rears his ugly head. I do not engage unless he tells me about his family. Life continues all around us every day. All we can control is us. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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She lives, as I do under that Chinese Blessing/Curse "may you have an interesting life". My life is rarely boring. Just when, I have my hopefully soon ex back under his rock, and quit trying to kill him legally in my stories, he rears his ugly head. I do not engage unless he tells me about his family. Life continues all around us every day. All we can control is us. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Controlling yourself is not something everyone can manage sometimes. Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
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I sometimes feel like a hot mess in a sack, put, I am far to stubborn to acquiesce. Thanks for the read. Karen
