At Last
It just didn't seem possible77 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is the essence of how true love plays out and the gentle words that are at play in this composition help to create the imagery held in the reader's mind. The author's notes then cement the happiness pervasive throughout the story. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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This is the essence of how true love plays out and the gentle words that are at play in this composition help to create the imagery held in the reader's mind. The author's notes then cement the happiness pervasive throughout the story. Congratulations!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019
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Thanks so much, my friend. I appreciate this review. :) Bob
Comment from SkullandRathbones
Oh my gosh! This is my favorite kind of story! True romance. The way Bill loves her even if she's handicapped makes it even more romantic because their just aren't many special men like that. :) I love it, Mastery!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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Oh my gosh! This is my favorite kind of story! True romance. The way Bill loves her even if she's handicapped makes it even more romantic because their just aren't many special men like that. :) I love it, Mastery!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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Well, thanks so much, Rathbones...(LOL Name please, if you don't mind) I see you joined a long time ago? Yet I've seen none of your writing? I'm lad to see you like this type of story. Perhaps you would also like my ongoing novel which sems to be very popular on here right now...called "Falling Up The Stairs" (You shoould start at the beginning though...Meanwhile...Iam going to start watching for your work everyday also...Take care and thanks again for the wonderful six stars! Bless you! Bob (Mastery)
Comment from cherry_rose
Wonderful! This is and amazingly romantic story. I was especially touched by the fact that Lynie was in the wheel chair. That was a suprise, but a pleasant one. Glad I had the chance to read this one.
cherry_
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2010
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Wonderful! This is and amazingly romantic story. I was especially touched by the fact that Lynie was in the wheel chair. That was a suprise, but a pleasant one. Glad I had the chance to read this one.
cherry_
Comment Written 07-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2010
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Thanks, Cherry...I always go fro the surprise ending if at all possible...sort of a trademark...LOL...Thanks again..Bob
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Thanks, Cherry...I always go fro the surprise ending if at all possible...sort of a trademark...LOL...Thanks again..Bob
Comment from knowledge
Reading your work is like watching movie scenes. You have such a handle on the written word for communication.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2010
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Reading your work is like watching movie scenes. You have such a handle on the written word for communication.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 07-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2010
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Thanks so much, Knowledge. I appreciate you very much....Bob
Comment from TimothyGriffin
Very strong work, Bob. Two things stood out: the main character's emotion and the change he'd gone through because of love. First, the emotion was strong as shown through the narrator's explanation of events. Second, the change he'd gone through because of love as he mentioned things that would've bothered him before now doesn't because he is sacrificing for her. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2010
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Very strong work, Bob. Two things stood out: the main character's emotion and the change he'd gone through because of love. First, the emotion was strong as shown through the narrator's explanation of events. Second, the change he'd gone through because of love as he mentioned things that would've bothered him before now doesn't because he is sacrificing for her. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much, Tim..I appreciate your time and your fine review...Bob
Comment from Sacred Heart
A beautiful romantic write. Every woman in her life longs for true love like this. I was captivated from beginning to end. Many blessings to you and your wife may you continue to have many more years together. Take care Love Light Patty
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2010
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A beautiful romantic write. Every woman in her life longs for true love like this. I was captivated from beginning to end. Many blessings to you and your wife may you continue to have many more years together. Take care Love Light Patty
Comment Written 20-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2010
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Well, thank you, Patty. How in the world did you find me? Just curious of course and welcome aboard, Fanstory. Bob
Comment from Nicnac
Oh, how romantic!
I was so caught up in this story. What a loving man Bill was, and what a lucky wife Lynie will become. I love the tidbit about her wheelchair. They let nothing come between their love.
Writing this in first person made it strong and more emotional.
Suggestions:
I told you that, didn't I?" she said. (she asked.)
"I love you so much, and I always will. Will you marry me, Lynie?(")
with a smile on my face and a melody in my heart(.)
I enjoyed your story, Bob. :)
Nic
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2010
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Oh, how romantic!
I was so caught up in this story. What a loving man Bill was, and what a lucky wife Lynie will become. I love the tidbit about her wheelchair. They let nothing come between their love.
Writing this in first person made it strong and more emotional.
Suggestions:
I told you that, didn't I?" she said. (she asked.)
"I love you so much, and I always will. Will you marry me, Lynie?(")
with a smile on my face and a melody in my heart(.)
I enjoyed your story, Bob. :)
Nic
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much, Nic....I appreciate this...Bob
Comment from eliz100
What a beautiful Valentine story!. It is wee-written. I have a question about the wheelchair, but maybe it is meant to be a mystery.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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What a beautiful Valentine story!. It is wee-written. I have a question about the wheelchair, but maybe it is meant to be a mystery.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Hi, elz...Yes, the wheelchair was just for the surprise ending effect. Thanks so very much for your review....Bob
Comment from bayoupoet
Bob, what a beautiful and very romantic Valentines story with lovely imagery and deep emotion. It is such a pleasure to read such a wonderful story! I wish you the Best of Luck in the Contest!
sandra
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
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Bob, what a beautiful and very romantic Valentines story with lovely imagery and deep emotion. It is such a pleasure to read such a wonderful story! I wish you the Best of Luck in the Contest!
sandra
Comment Written 13-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much, sandra...XX Bob
Comment from fayesh
Your little story of a proposal was done well. The fact at the end that the woman was in a wheel chair was both a surprise and made the story even more special.
"Just that it was fancy. (Someplace) special."
s/b "Just that it was fancy, some place special."
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
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Your little story of a proposal was done well. The fact at the end that the woman was in a wheel chair was both a surprise and made the story even more special.
"Just that it was fancy. (Someplace) special."
s/b "Just that it was fancy, some place special."
Comment Written 13-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010
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Thanks for your nice review, fayesh and thanks also for the tip...Bob