Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Part three, Chapter 10"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
The hell with this, Anna needs a frigging gun and trained pitbull. That bastard is seriously twisted and I already know he's willing to kill her. I swear if he doesn't get a bullet between the eyes soon I'm never gonna read you again.
Okay, just one more, for real this is it.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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The hell with this, Anna needs a frigging gun and trained pitbull. That bastard is seriously twisted and I already know he's willing to kill her. I swear if he doesn't get a bullet between the eyes soon I'm never gonna read you again.
Okay, just one more, for real this is it.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from Aislinge
Great chapter, Barbara. I like how the beginning scene is more serene, then how the emotions start to escalate during the sentencing, up to Bobby's vow of revenge. The dialog is done well. The end of the piece leaves a bit of suspense as the reader wonders if Bobby will engineer an attempt on Anna's life.
Thanks for a great read.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2011
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Great chapter, Barbara. I like how the beginning scene is more serene, then how the emotions start to escalate during the sentencing, up to Bobby's vow of revenge. The dialog is done well. The end of the piece leaves a bit of suspense as the reader wonders if Bobby will engineer an attempt on Anna's life.
Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
HI BARBARA!
I'VE MISSED SOME CHAPTERS DUE TO PROBLEMS WITH MY EYES. BUT NOW, ALMOST BACK TO NORMAL, I FOUND THIS INTERESTING STORY IN A VERY IMPORTANT MOMENT. REALLY A VERY ENJOYABLE READING!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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HI BARBARA!
I'VE MISSED SOME CHAPTERS DUE TO PROBLEMS WITH MY EYES. BUT NOW, ALMOST BACK TO NORMAL, I FOUND THIS INTERESTING STORY IN A VERY IMPORTANT MOMENT. REALLY A VERY ENJOYABLE READING!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, Barbara.
This was an exceptional read. You illustrated so well how Bobby's behavior went unrewarded in court. Overwhelmed as I am about catching up on back reviews, this was a delight to read. I'm sorry Anna has fear, but it is only natural. I don't think Bobby will get ahance to harm her. I look forward to your next post, and wish you well this week.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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Hello, Barbara.
This was an exceptional read. You illustrated so well how Bobby's behavior went unrewarded in court. Overwhelmed as I am about catching up on back reviews, this was a delight to read. I'm sorry Anna has fear, but it is only natural. I don't think Bobby will get ahance to harm her. I look forward to your next post, and wish you well this week.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 28-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I am thrilled at teh outcome of teh court case.
Things could hardly have turned out better for Anna, even down to Bobby having to pay the court costs.
It seems that Anna will just have to learn how to defend herself, given Bobby's parting words.
Juliette
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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I am thrilled at teh outcome of teh court case.
Things could hardly have turned out better for Anna, even down to Bobby having to pay the court costs.
It seems that Anna will just have to learn how to defend herself, given Bobby's parting words.
Juliette
Comment Written 28-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from forestport12
What a compelling and chilly way to end the chapter. But you painted a sad and realistic portrait in our society. So much for freedom of speech. Another round of clear crisp sentences that put the reader on edge.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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What a compelling and chilly way to end the chapter. But you painted a sad and realistic portrait in our society. So much for freedom of speech. Another round of clear crisp sentences that put the reader on edge.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mariea
Good morning Barbara. Another well written chapter that kept me interested. Characters and dialogue realistic and without any clutter. The story is still developing smoothly as it progresses.
Unsure what P.I? is
Have a great day, hugs Mia
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Good morning Barbara. Another well written chapter that kept me interested. Characters and dialogue realistic and without any clutter. The story is still developing smoothly as it progresses.
Unsure what P.I? is
Have a great day, hugs Mia
Comment Written 28-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
PI is a private investigator
Comment from Janie King
Ogh good Lord..it seems these women are never really free unless their tormentor is blessed enough to die..she's lucky to have at least someone to try to protect her. my computer's been down and I've had some of my own health issues but things should get back to norm before too long. How's school going? God bless.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Ogh good Lord..it seems these women are never really free unless their tormentor is blessed enough to die..she's lucky to have at least someone to try to protect her. my computer's been down and I've had some of my own health issues but things should get back to norm before too long. How's school going? God bless.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A tense time for poor Anna,
and although the case turned
out the better for her and
little Michael, she still
fears the bully of a husband,
which is understandable, as
he doesn't seem the type
to worry about the law.
her[,] how
Well-penned, Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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A tense time for poor Anna,
and although the case turned
out the better for her and
little Michael, she still
fears the bully of a husband,
which is understandable, as
he doesn't seem the type
to worry about the law.
her[,] how
Well-penned, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 28-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Larrypic11
Powerful work continues, Barbara. Just a thought. I think the judge would do more than eject Bobby from the courtroom for that behavior. He might threaten to lock him up for a few days. Good luck as you continue. Larry
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Powerful work continues, Barbara. Just a thought. I think the judge would do more than eject Bobby from the courtroom for that behavior. He might threaten to lock him up for a few days. Good luck as you continue. Larry
Comment Written 28-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.