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Comment from jmdg1954
Well, Gretchen, it may not "be your thing" but for me you provided us with a nice story.
Honestly, knowing you bc and Halloween, I started reading this waiting for a gruesome ending.
Ha. Was I wrong. Nicely done!
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Well, Gretchen, it may not "be your thing" but for me you provided us with a nice story.
Honestly, knowing you bc and Halloween, I started reading this waiting for a gruesome ending.
Ha. Was I wrong. Nicely done!
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Lol. I honestly try to label my work so there is no question. Glad I didn't ruin it with a nasty witch. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
well, romance may not be the genre of your choice, but you sure hit this out of the park. I've got a soft spot for romance stories, if they aren't too mushy. Like Goldilocks and the three bears, this one was just right gal. Well done.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Hello Gretchen,
well, romance may not be the genre of your choice, but you sure hit this out of the park. I've got a soft spot for romance stories, if they aren't too mushy. Like Goldilocks and the three bears, this one was just right gal. Well done.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Thank you. You won't read too many of them from me. Glad you liked it. Gretchen
Comment from w.j.debi
You did a great job of foreshadowing. I was hoping Cary was the man of Maggie's dreams. Best friends should be together as they know each other's frailties, fears, and strengths and still like each other.
Great romance. Maybe it isn't your general genre, but it was a terrific venture into romance.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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You did a great job of foreshadowing. I was hoping Cary was the man of Maggie's dreams. Best friends should be together as they know each other's frailties, fears, and strengths and still like each other.
Great romance. Maybe it isn't your general genre, but it was a terrific venture into romance.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I will occasionally get bit by the romance bug but not often. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love a good romance, almost as much as horror movies. LoL this one was perfect... wonderful imagery... I was there feeling that exciting first kiss, the butterflies in my stomach and goosebumps on my arms, the anticipation... how wonderful to fall in love with your best friend.
Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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I love a good romance, almost as much as horror movies. LoL this one was perfect... wonderful imagery... I was there feeling that exciting first kiss, the butterflies in my stomach and goosebumps on my arms, the anticipation... how wonderful to fall in love with your best friend.
Well done!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the exceptional rating. Gretchen
Comment from JSD
Aww. That is so sweet. After reading the last one I thought we were in for some horror and they were going to fall out, but it all turned out to be a beautiful little love story. Thank you!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Aww. That is so sweet. After reading the last one I thought we were in for some horror and they were going to fall out, but it all turned out to be a beautiful little love story. Thank you!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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I like to keep you guessing. Lol. I'm not a huge fan of romance but every once in a while the inspiration hits. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Kate Chase
This is a well-crafted story and stood out to me! A beautiful plot and very clever! Everything from beginning to end said something magical was going to happen and it was just perfect. Brilliant job!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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This is a well-crafted story and stood out to me! A beautiful plot and very clever! Everything from beginning to end said something magical was going to happen and it was just perfect. Brilliant job!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from jessizero
I was enchanted by this story. It was romantic and sweet. I dated my best friend once, but it didn't turn out well. I'd like to think things worked out for your characters. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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I was enchanted by this story. It was romantic and sweet. I dated my best friend once, but it didn't turn out well. I'd like to think things worked out for your characters. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Never thought about those characters after that story. But I'll say yes, they are still happy and in love. Lol. I appreciate your kindness. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine romance and I have never been a big fan of the ferris wheel as I always think of all the things that could go wrong! But this girl will do anything to be with the one she loves, a magical story Gretchen, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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A fine romance and I have never been a big fan of the ferris wheel as I always think of all the things that could go wrong! But this girl will do anything to be with the one she loves, a magical story Gretchen, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Dolly. I'm glad you liked it. Ferris wheel was kind of boring to be honest. I love a roller coaster. Thanks again, Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
You are a romance writer, for sure. No matter what you say.
I think every one who can write, and possesses any feelings at all, had at least one romance in them. Good work.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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You are a romance writer, for sure. No matter what you say.
I think every one who can write, and possesses any feelings at all, had at least one romance in them. Good work.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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It's just not something I enjoy writing. So, thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a lovely, 'feel good' story which I enjoyed reading. As ever, it had that imaginative ending rather than anything too predictable. And no horror element. Just you showing your versatility in another genre. Well done, Gretchen! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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This is a lovely, 'feel good' story which I enjoyed reading. As ever, it had that imaginative ending rather than anything too predictable. And no horror element. Just you showing your versatility in another genre. Well done, Gretchen! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Thank you. I'm so happy you liked it. Gretchen