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Comment from GarthL
As a lover of chess this captured me and then the 5-7-5 gave me a smile. Thanks, I think it's a very creative little write. Good luck in the contest and all your future endeavors! LiveLove'n'Light, Garth
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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As a lover of chess this captured me and then the 5-7-5 gave me a smile. Thanks, I think it's a very creative little write. Good luck in the contest and all your future endeavors! LiveLove'n'Light, Garth
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
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Cheers!!!
Comment from Jacq77
This fun poem had me chuckling loudly. Very clever use of words, and it was good to see a bit of humour for a change. Artwork was super - very apt. Loved it!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This fun poem had me chuckling loudly. Very clever use of words, and it was good to see a bit of humour for a change. Artwork was super - very apt. Loved it!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Kevin C
This is an excellent 5-7-5 that not only reads well but, I love the humor in it. It was not something I expected. I loved the originality of this 5-7-5. Great artwork just adds.
Kevin
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 that not only reads well but, I love the humor in it. It was not something I expected. I loved the originality of this 5-7-5. Great artwork just adds.
Kevin
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Indie Skreet
this is pretty tweet, so well done in creating something imaginative when so often Haiku's fall into the banal category. Clever wit which made me smile. Gotta be a contender for the competition, so best of luck, regards Indie
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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this is pretty tweet, so well done in creating something imaginative when so often Haiku's fall into the banal category. Clever wit which made me smile. Gotta be a contender for the competition, so best of luck, regards Indie
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you reviewing this.
Comment from Harlequin
Hehe. Funny. I think you have a chance to win that competition with your witty little poem. Very good choice of photo. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Hehe. Funny. I think you have a chance to win that competition with your witty little poem. Very good choice of photo. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you reviewing this.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Enchanting analogy and a well said piece of doggerel disguised as a Haiku or a Senyu..I never could tell the difference. So unusual and infinitely charming.
Regards:
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Enchanting analogy and a well said piece of doggerel disguised as a Haiku or a Senyu..I never could tell the difference. So unusual and infinitely charming.
Regards:
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thank you reviewing this.
Comment from Righteous Riter
This meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct as the passion of the writer is felt. The words bring the photo to life as this piece is short, sweet, to the point and humorous. Nice work.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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This meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct as the passion of the writer is felt. The words bring the photo to life as this piece is short, sweet, to the point and humorous. Nice work.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Peculiar or unconventional knot and convictional checkmate, good incorporation of witty and pun with an animal invited as put in nice visual and orderly projection of the viewpoint with dire game spirit, I liked.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Peculiar or unconventional knot and convictional checkmate, good incorporation of witty and pun with an animal invited as put in nice visual and orderly projection of the viewpoint with dire game spirit, I liked.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from adewpearl
What a fun illustration and title - I'm delighted already and I haven't even read the poem yet LOL
Oh, now I have read the poem and I'm laughing my head off over tweety's lisp and the whole situation
good alliteration
great humor
good 5/7/5 form :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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What a fun illustration and title - I'm delighted already and I haven't even read the poem yet LOL
Oh, now I have read the poem and I'm laughing my head off over tweety's lisp and the whole situation
good alliteration
great humor
good 5/7/5 form :-) Brooke
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you Brooke for reviewing this.
Comment from Bobbi22
I didn't know Tweety played chess. Great play on words. Loved Tweety's favorite line. Funny and witty 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I didn't know Tweety played chess. Great play on words. Loved Tweety's favorite line. Funny and witty 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your encouraging review.