Magic moments
111 words. Sixty fans16 total reviews
Comment from SaluteDobby
I really loved this poem, Dallas. Smooth flow, perfect rhymes and fun to read. It's light hearted, non-preachy and feels like you are singing it to one of your grandkids. All the best with the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
I really loved this poem, Dallas. Smooth flow, perfect rhymes and fun to read. It's light hearted, non-preachy and feels like you are singing it to one of your grandkids. All the best with the contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much for the kind review and the bonus star.
Comment from Sueellen11
Well my friend you met all the contest requirements, this is a lovely entry into this contest, lovely rhyming couplets, very smooth flow, making for an easy read, well done, good luck, blessings, sueellen
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
Well my friend you met all the contest requirements, this is a lovely entry into this contest, lovely rhyming couplets, very smooth flow, making for an easy read, well done, good luck, blessings, sueellen
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from NadineM
This poem is perfectly complimented with the artwork you included. Great inspirational message throughout the poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
This poem is perfectly complimented with the artwork you included. Great inspirational message throughout the poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Thatguypk
What a lovely flight of fancy. I'll have to start using magic moments on my little fella when he's grumpy!! :-) Beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
What a lovely flight of fancy. I'll have to start using magic moments on my little fella when he's grumpy!! :-) Beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Supe
What a delightful entry for the kids contest. It flows from start to finish and the picture is so o perfect. I notice that it is a girl, though, lol Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
What a delightful entry for the kids contest. It flows from start to finish and the picture is so o perfect. I notice that it is a girl, though, lol Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Think unisex...lol Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of rhyming couplets
lovely images children are sure to enjoy like changing the rain to polka dots
good use of personification
slide down stripes/song on silver - nice alliteration
more good alliteration follows
I love the fanciful and upbeat nature of this poem for children :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
solid use of rhyming couplets
lovely images children are sure to enjoy like changing the rain to polka dots
good use of personification
slide down stripes/song on silver - nice alliteration
more good alliteration follows
I love the fanciful and upbeat nature of this poem for children :-) Brooke
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Brooke. Need to get out of the serious once in a while.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Virtual sixer! Clever wording and impressive photo. Lovely meaning too... Nice progression, rhythm and flow for a fluent read. Impressive imagery throughout, Deb
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
Virtual sixer! Clever wording and impressive photo. Lovely meaning too... Nice progression, rhythm and flow for a fluent read. Impressive imagery throughout, Deb
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the virtual six. Appreciate it.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Ooh, this is absolutely delightful, Dallas. I don't think I could write anything near this good if my life depended on it. What a truly wonderful contest entry. Hope you win!
Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
Ooh, this is absolutely delightful, Dallas. I don't think I could write anything near this good if my life depended on it. What a truly wonderful contest entry. Hope you win!
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Thanks so much, Bev, for your review and well wishes.
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You're very welcome, Dallas. :0)
Comment from RYME4U
Very well written. The fantasy and whimsy are well presented here. This was a delightful poem to read. Rhyme and rhythym were very smooth Good job!
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
Very well written. The fantasy and whimsy are well presented here. This was a delightful poem to read. Rhyme and rhythym were very smooth Good job!
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Bina1
What a splendid, delightful poem. Just spreads happiness as it flows. Good luck in the contest, a great entry you offer here!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
What a splendid, delightful poem. Just spreads happiness as it flows. Good luck in the contest, a great entry you offer here!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.