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Magic moments

111 words. Sixty fans

16 total reviews 
Comment from SaluteDobby
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I really loved this poem, Dallas. Smooth flow, perfect rhymes and fun to read. It's light hearted, non-preachy and feels like you are singing it to one of your grandkids. All the best with the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
    Thanks so much for the kind review and the bonus star.
Comment from Sueellen11
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Well my friend you met all the contest requirements, this is a lovely entry into this contest, lovely rhyming couplets, very smooth flow, making for an easy read, well done, good luck, blessings, sueellen

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from NadineM
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This poem is perfectly complimented with the artwork you included. Great inspirational message throughout the poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Thatguypk
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What a lovely flight of fancy. I'll have to start using magic moments on my little fella when he's grumpy!! :-) Beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
    Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Supe
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What a delightful entry for the kids contest. It flows from start to finish and the picture is so o perfect. I notice that it is a girl, though, lol Good luck.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
    Think unisex...lol Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from adewpearl
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solid use of rhyming couplets
lovely images children are sure to enjoy like changing the rain to polka dots
good use of personification
slide down stripes/song on silver - nice alliteration
more good alliteration follows
I love the fanciful and upbeat nature of this poem for children :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
    Thanks, Brooke. Need to get out of the serious once in a while.
Comment from Deborah Marie
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Virtual sixer! Clever wording and impressive photo. Lovely meaning too... Nice progression, rhythm and flow for a fluent read. Impressive imagery throughout, Deb

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
    Thanks for the virtual six. Appreciate it.
Comment from Writingfundimension
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Ooh, this is absolutely delightful, Dallas. I don't think I could write anything near this good if my life depended on it. What a truly wonderful contest entry. Hope you win!

Warmest regards, Bev

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thanks so much, Bev, for your review and well wishes.
reply by Writingfundimension on 12-Sep-2013
    You're very welcome, Dallas. :0)
Comment from RYME4U
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Very well written. The fantasy and whimsy are well presented here. This was a delightful poem to read. Rhyme and rhythym were very smooth Good job!

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Bina1
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What a splendid, delightful poem. Just spreads happiness as it flows. Good luck in the contest, a great entry you offer here!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
    Thank you for the kind review.