Ego building
Guilty as charged.2 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Good word play and witty fanstorian commentary. Very true, for many members! Good alliteration on W and P and consonance of M. Tight and effective word economy. Fine presentation.
An idea (not correction) to replace 'a' with a descriptive word (also alliterative)
write-workout in the weight room
Good luck in this contest. Should prove a contender.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Good word play and witty fanstorian commentary. Very true, for many members! Good alliteration on W and P and consonance of M. Tight and effective word economy. Fine presentation.
An idea (not correction) to replace 'a' with a descriptive word (also alliterative)
write-workout in the weight room
Good luck in this contest. Should prove a contender.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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love your witty idea but feel I would be cheating to use this great idea...changing to word instead. Thanks
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Oh yeah! I like WORD even better. Good job! warmly, rd
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:.)
Dallas
Comment from ruminative scribbler
Ha Ha Ha!
Yes, a very astute and humorous observation.
I am also guilty, as charged :P
Thanks for sharing and I wish you well in this contest :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Ha Ha Ha!
Yes, a very astute and humorous observation.
I am also guilty, as charged :P
Thanks for sharing and I wish you well in this contest :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2013
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Thanks for reviewing. Made a slight change.