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Bad Judgment

ten word story

8 total reviews 
Comment from Lovinia
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Hi Mystery Writer

A good entry here, and boy does he deserve to be in the dog-house. lol
NO chocolate or roses .... next V-Day make sure you get both. :)))

A number of clever writers managing to tell a complete story in so few words. Impresses me. Good luck in the contest. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxoxo

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    Thanks for the read.
reply by Lovinia on 29-Oct-2013
    My pleasure. :))
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
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This is very good. You manage quite a bit with your allotted words, a plot, a pair of characters, and even a smile. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    I appreciate the read and review.
Comment from Sueellen11
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Poor wife,,, even more poor hubby for ,forgetting,,, bet he got no dinner or desert,,,I like it,,great entry,,well done,, you mt all contest requirements,,good luck,,blessings,,sueellen

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    Thanks for reading.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, mystery writer, with excellent wordplay with the thorny reception. it made me smile as it presented a picture. i wish you the best ofl uck in the contest

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
    I appreciate your read and review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is way funny. I could see it as a headline on a newspaper on a Valentine's Day card. Good luck in the contest; so well done.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
    It must be strange to be forced to write more about the read than exists in words, but I know that FS insists on it. Thanks.
Comment from Econ Teacher
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This story definitely tells a sad encounter. Too bad the guy made such a bad mistake. How can one forget Valentine's day? The word judgment is more commonly spelled without the "e"

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
    Man, only twelve words, including he title and I make a mistake in the title. What a goof I am. Thanks.
Comment from Matthew M.
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It is bad when the guy forgets Valentine's day. You have a creative twist with the word thorny. It truly is bad judgment on the part of the man.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
    Thanks for reading. Appreciate the review on such a short piece.
Comment from billscott
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Uh oh, that explains my evening's events.

Just kidding.

Sometimes this might explain her side of the story...hehe.

A very tight little story wrapped up with so much story.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
    Thanks for reading. So, you're having a prickly night....so sorry.