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Personal growth stories for children

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Comment from lakeport
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Animals at play, indeed it is always fun to go to a zoo or circus, that's a beautiful expressed poem. nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
    Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
reply by lakeport on 24-Jan-2014
    your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Spitfire
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Children would love this with all the movement: swinging, swimming, jumping, diving and hopping. What fun they could have acting it out. Very cute!



 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

    thanks Shari, fun review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Petriesan
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nope, we never could name them all. . .it amazed me how many different species there really and truly are and how many come into existence every year...

nice fun poem for kids

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    Thanks for this wonderful review. Creation is a wondrous thing.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Carolyn,

I must be in my second childhood with a little mind, because I love reading things that are written simply and are easy to understand. I really enjoyed your cute poem.

Kat

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    Thanks Kat, Dylan might enjoy hearing this one. Tell him his #1 fan, Carolyn wrote it. :-)
Comment from emrpoems
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An adorable little poem well written to amuse children.
Quatrains with some perfect and imperfect abcb rhymes.Surely a beautiful poem easily read and enjoyed

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    My thanks to you for this great review and rating. I am glad you enjoyed Animals at play. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
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Very nice poem written in quatrains. LOvely for young children, Carolyn. I liked it. It reads very smoothly. Great job. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    I appreciate your wonderful comments. Thank you so much, :-) Carolyn
Comment from BLACKDYKE
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'Just a little kids poem' which
I find entertaining to notesandmore.
Funny and enjoyable and well put
together with picture to match.
A easily rhyming and rhythmic piece
for a quite afternoon. Eric

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    I am delighted you enjoyed reading Animals at play. Thanks for this great review. :-) Carolyn
reply by BLACKDYKE on 24-Jan-2014
    My pleasure
Comment from Curly Girly
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I enjoyed reading this fun kids' poem about animals. Children do enjoy visiting the zoo and watching them. Animals are wonderful tools for learning and exploring our precious earth.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    Thanks Nicole, I'm glad you enjoyed this one, and I appreciate the great comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Ben Colder
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A delightful poem for children. You did good with this. I thought of Dr. Zeus and other children books. Well done poet. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    Thanks Ben Colder for this wonderful review. Glad you liked Animals at play. Dr. Zeus, hmmmmmmmm. :-) Carolyn
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was a happy verse and I really think that children would enjoy it. The imagery of each animal and the little bit of information you give with each is both entertaining and educational. I loved the imagery and the emotion to this. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
    Many thanks for this great review. I am happy you enjoyed Animals at play. :-) Carolyn