Winter dismantles
Let the process begin.3 total reviews
Comment from Oz Harte
The concluding line not only completes the poem but connects intimately with the introductory line.
The internal movement, or rhythm, of the poem was not forced and built to a satisfying and unexpected ending.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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The concluding line not only completes the poem but connects intimately with the introductory line.
The internal movement, or rhythm, of the poem was not forced and built to a satisfying and unexpected ending.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and welcome to fanstory.
Comment from persevere
Your poetic description of the change from winter to spring is crisp and clear. In our part of the world we don't have icicles, only an easing of winter rains.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Your poetic description of the change from winter to spring is crisp and clear. In our part of the world we don't have icicles, only an easing of winter rains.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Consider yourself lucky. It's been a long winter here.
Comment from manicblue
Describing the end of winter and the beginning of spring was nicely presented. I could picture the process with few words to work with -- it reads well. Now if only spring were really here!
mb xx
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Describing the end of winter and the beginning of spring was nicely presented. I could picture the process with few words to work with -- it reads well. Now if only spring were really here!
mb xx
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Wishful thinking.