Comment from victor 66

Excellent

'Dandelions' work for me. My experience with poetry is minimal. But, I am developing a taste for it. And a Lune Poem is interesting. To me, a 'Lune' has to do with contemplation. I certainly liked yours. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks so much. I am glad you liked it! 8-)

reply by victor 66 on 26-Mar-2014

You are welcome.

Comment from Carole Rosa

Excellent

To the author of Springtime Flowers. I don't know where you live, but there won't be any daffodils dancing in my wind for a long time. It snowed again today in Michigan!! BUT, the lovely little poem and springtime photo art is encouraging to me. Carole

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Ha! Sorry you are still in the winter mode. Here in the South, spring is teasing us with warmer days but still really cool nights. The daffodils are brave. 8-)

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

Beautiful description, a lot of emotion in few words, and nice memories of your mom honored here. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from daniela.albu

Good

A wonderful artwork. However, your haiku is too descriptive and it thus looses the chance of creating strong feelings by poetic suggestions. Try the power of metaphor and avoid too much description especially when you must use so few words to abide by this format of the condensed haiku.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thanks.

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

Love this poem! Daffodils are my favorite spring flower, but unfortunately, it's been so hot in California this winter, they didn't do well at all. Your poem & photo convey how this is an iconic springtime flower that evokes memories & other warm fuzzy feelings in many people. Thanks for sharing & good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

This is just beautiful...I love daffodils...I love anything in the lily family...a beautiful picture and a great poem...so very well written

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

reply by l.raven on 25-Mar-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from Val Crisson

Excellent

Sweet little lune with a lovely nostalgic feeling to it. As a Seattle transplant, I always hoped for spring when I saw those yellow blooms. I believe this little poem brings back that felling of rebirth. Nice flow also

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

good luck in the contest
great picture


is that what your grandma planted? daffodils?

good depiction of them in your little poem

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Yes. Thanks so much!

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a pretty springtime Lune poem, very attractively presented. It meets the syllable count and form requirements of this contest. Good luck to you, Jeanie MErcer

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a great lune poem for the writing prompt. You have followed all of the rules. Best of luck in the contest:)
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014

Thanks so much!