The feast
Witches invitation to dinner.5 total reviews
Comment from Karen B.
I'm not sure it was a wise decision of mine to read these contest entries just before bedtime, lol. I love the imagery here - "beside the pit an empty shoe" and "the scent of stranger on spit turning". Wonderfully creepy.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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I'm not sure it was a wise decision of mine to read these contest entries just before bedtime, lol. I love the imagery here - "beside the pit an empty shoe" and "the scent of stranger on spit turning". Wonderfully creepy.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Ha ha. thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Willowsong
Wonderful imagery used. Flowed flawlessly with excellent rhythm and rhyme. Tantalizing topic chosen and great addition of the music.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Wonderful imagery used. Flowed flawlessly with excellent rhythm and rhyme. Tantalizing topic chosen and great addition of the music.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the positive review.
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You're welcome :-)
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. This is one cook out I do not want to be at. Being the major dinner guest may mean I am the one on the stick. Gentlemen stay out of the woods. Great work.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. This is one cook out I do not want to be at. Being the major dinner guest may mean I am the one on the stick. Gentlemen stay out of the woods. Great work.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the hilarious review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yummy. Cannibalism and witches cursed cauldrons. This is most definitely a well composed, chilling tale in a classic horror vein.
Bubble, bubble, toil and trouble, witches fly and cauldrons bubble... I'm sorry, but I simply couldn't get this out of my head as I read it. I happen to enjoy stories of covens and the debauchery they're frequently associated with, and your poem was no exception.
Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest...
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Yummy. Cannibalism and witches cursed cauldrons. This is most definitely a well composed, chilling tale in a classic horror vein.
Bubble, bubble, toil and trouble, witches fly and cauldrons bubble... I'm sorry, but I simply couldn't get this out of my head as I read it. I happen to enjoy stories of covens and the debauchery they're frequently associated with, and your poem was no exception.
Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest...
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the detailed review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Joan E.
I did not get notification of this post--so, I assume it's for a contest--best wishes. Shades of Macbeth--double, bubble, toil and trouble! Quite a grizzly scene, but I admired your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains and use of alliteration. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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I did not get notification of this post--so, I assume it's for a contest--best wishes. Shades of Macbeth--double, bubble, toil and trouble! Quite a grizzly scene, but I admired your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains and use of alliteration. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the review and best wishes.