Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is well written free verse. Very expressive and descriptive.I like the depth of meaning here.The presentation is very attractive. Great job!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Your thoughtfully written poem about seeking wisdom and growth from within, is well penned. It reads smoothly and with clarity from the page. The pathway you described is a pathway of inner wisdom found in meditation and stillnes. It can lead to true growth. Good work here. Good fortune in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thanks so much for your wonderful review

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Keep close to Nature's heart... and break clear away, once in awhile, and climb a mountain or spend a week in the woods. Wash your spirit clean.
Memorable ending; where the control game ends
and sovereignty begins
Best of luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thank you for the encouraging review and comments.

Comment from daniela.albu

Excellent

A wonderful poem about the spiritual inner journey towards "the wisdom within". It is an exciting journey harmonized with the cosmic serenity and you describe it so wellÈ?
"knowing is the power, enabling us to grow
connecting with the depth of our being
where the control game ends
and sovereignty begins."

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review. I appreciate it.