Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. I am not a great lover of bees but I know how important they are to spring flowers. I would also miss Their honey. Birds f spring would not be the same without the bees. Great work.

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Comment from l.raven

Excellent

and yes it is that time of the year...when flowers bloom and I get stung...LOL...but the bees have a wonderful reason to be here...love your poem and the picture...

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you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from marion

Excellent

Hi there
I am enjoying reading all the entries in the 5/7/5 and now 3/5/3 writing prompts competitions. Love the way you have the bee flying to the 'heart' if the spring flower - the pic shows exactly that, and then of course - pollinates. Good Luck on this well presented entry. Marion.

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Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

You paint a lovely picture of summer. Every aspect of nature is needed. Without bees we'd be, as a human race in serious trouble. Wonderfully written, Les

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Great photo to illustrate your poem. Love the green background too, and with the yellow contrast, it's so spring/summerish.

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax

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