Dreams and Lullabies
night time thoughts5 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What a lovely image and thoughtfully written codary poem.
The codary guidelines are adhered to and the subject choice is great.
The dark night sky is an impressive sight when all aglow with an air of magic and mystery.
Good luck in the writing lrompt contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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What a lovely image and thoughtfully written codary poem.
The codary guidelines are adhered to and the subject choice is great.
The dark night sky is an impressive sight when all aglow with an air of magic and mystery.
Good luck in the writing lrompt contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your following of the format works well
good visual to portray message of lullabies
good enjambment allows free flow
good alliteration in
starry, shapes
silent . sleep
cheers..Smoothiecol
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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good luck in the contest
your following of the format works well
good visual to portray message of lullabies
good enjambment allows free flow
good alliteration in
starry, shapes
silent . sleep
cheers..Smoothiecol
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
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welcome..SC >>Faye
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Nicely done! I don't know about you, but I had never heard of this style before and it was actually fun to do. You inspire lovely imagery with this making it a delightful read. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Nicely done! I don't know about you, but I had never heard of this style before and it was actually fun to do. You inspire lovely imagery with this making it a delightful read. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Eric1
We have all as children lay outside on the grass looking up at the sky and tried to decipher the shape of the stars, this is a wonderful dreamy odary that should do very well in the competition, Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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We have all as children lay outside on the grass looking up at the sky and tried to decipher the shape of the stars, this is a wonderful dreamy odary that should do very well in the competition, Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from GabbyLew
I looked at the criteria for codary and your poem lines up with it in my estimation, but I have no prior experience with this type of poem.
I like this poem though. The images are vivid, and the last line ties it all together.
Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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I looked at the criteria for codary and your poem lines up with it in my estimation, but I have no prior experience with this type of poem.
I like this poem though. The images are vivid, and the last line ties it all together.
Great job.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thank you