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Comment from Ogden
Billy said a mouthful there. Some of what he wrote was insightful, and as a whole his poem did lack structure. He might become a writer someday.
:)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Billy said a mouthful there. Some of what he wrote was insightful, and as a whole his poem did lack structure. He might become a writer someday.
:)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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If they don?t hang him first.
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If they don?t hang him first.
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wonderful piece of writing. Just lovely! Nice mix of grammar, and a beautiful story-line in a poem. You did great justice to this. Cheers and kudos!
My very best wishes!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Wonderful piece of writing. Just lovely! Nice mix of grammar, and a beautiful story-line in a poem. You did great justice to this. Cheers and kudos!
My very best wishes!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Precious
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This free verse poem speaks about writing blocks and writing notions down, sometimes, writers experience something like these; well said, well done; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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This free verse poem speaks about writing blocks and writing notions down, sometimes, writers experience something like these; well said, well done; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Ashtar Zaidi
Wow what a wonderful words, i'd like it, great work, thank you so much for sharing your fine work with us, you have got something special from God... God Bless You...
~Ashtar~
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Wow what a wonderful words, i'd like it, great work, thank you so much for sharing your fine work with us, you have got something special from God... God Bless You...
~Ashtar~
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Ashtar
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My pleasure... :)
Comment from granny goes viral
Yes, I can relate to that. It is different I have found using pen and pad, as opposed to to using the old fashioned typewriter, as opposed to the new fangled gizmo I now use...cut and paste, spell check, whole thing makes it easier, or is it cheating? And to think I once used a quill.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Yes, I can relate to that. It is different I have found using pen and pad, as opposed to to using the old fashioned typewriter, as opposed to the new fangled gizmo I now use...cut and paste, spell check, whole thing makes it easier, or is it cheating? And to think I once used a quill.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you for taking a look at this. A quill?
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Yeah,I am really old. Giggle.
Comment from lindalcreel
Billy sounds like a writer to me. He isn't alone when it comes to writing down his ideas and then having to go back and do the editing. I loved the picture; it was appropriate for this post.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Billy sounds like a writer to me. He isn't alone when it comes to writing down his ideas and then having to go back and do the editing. I loved the picture; it was appropriate for this post.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Linda, for the excellent review.
Comment from Alan K Pease
In writing poetry the poet encounters diverse thoughts . If the poem survives it must have acquired structure of some sort.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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In writing poetry the poet encounters diverse thoughts . If the poem survives it must have acquired structure of some sort.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Alan, for taking a look at this.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Every mistake in 'arts' be it words art of impression arts is another step to new creativity form, new revelation. You run this work on the platter of imagery, with good delivery of its message. Nicely crafted.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Every mistake in 'arts' be it words art of impression arts is another step to new creativity form, new revelation. You run this work on the platter of imagery, with good delivery of its message. Nicely crafted.
ola thomas
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Ola, for giving this a look.
Comment from Nosha17
They do say the pen is mightier than the sword, you just proved it. I agree, I was on that mountainside in Wales and I felt I had to write and I guess, my poem turned out pretty good. Well chosen words to express your powerful message. Enjoyable read and good complimentary illustration. Faye
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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They do say the pen is mightier than the sword, you just proved it. I agree, I was on that mountainside in Wales and I felt I had to write and I guess, my poem turned out pretty good. Well chosen words to express your powerful message. Enjoyable read and good complimentary illustration. Faye
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Faye, for the positive review.
Comment from maggieadams
What a cool poem loaded with imagery and meaning...we have so many random thoughts and some we think are grand...it is when we have to put them together in convincing fashion we balk...loved the ending.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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What a cool poem loaded with imagery and meaning...we have so many random thoughts and some we think are grand...it is when we have to put them together in convincing fashion we balk...loved the ending.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Maggie, for the positive review.