Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Turn The Lights Down Low"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
27 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Woooo-hoooo-hooo! Ha-Cha=chhaaa!!!
This song/poem was sweet, sensuous and INTENSE, my friend! I thought you did a great job writing this one for the prompt - what I loved most was the fact I couldn't tell it was for a prompt right away. (Most of the time you can spot them from the jump!)
Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Woooo-hoooo-hooo! Ha-Cha=chhaaa!!!
This song/poem was sweet, sensuous and INTENSE, my friend! I thought you did a great job writing this one for the prompt - what I loved most was the fact I couldn't tell it was for a prompt right away. (Most of the time you can spot them from the jump!)
Good luck!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. I actually wrote this about 5 years ago, so no, it was not written for a prompt. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from jmdg1954
Your poem tells a story in soft, passionate phrasing. I enjoyed reading this from word one. Many are the lines that drew me further into your poem.
Thank you for posting this and best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Your poem tells a story in soft, passionate phrasing. I enjoyed reading this from word one. Many are the lines that drew me further into your poem.
Thank you for posting this and best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 06-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed my Country lyrics. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from bard owl
Your poem is the description of a loving scene that has taken place millions of times in millions of places and will continue to do so until the end of time. There is an urgency to your words and the repetition enhances it. Best of luck in the contest with this romantic work. Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Your poem is the description of a loving scene that has taken place millions of times in millions of places and will continue to do so until the end of time. There is an urgency to your words and the repetition enhances it. Best of luck in the contest with this romantic work. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Pantygynt
I am consumed with curiosity to know what this latest news is that would have you not enjoying each other tonight. I have a sneaking suspicion that is something I'm not going to be told.
I am also suffering from gender problems here. Its not that I am homophobic, although I come from a generation that generally speaking is. I like to think I have risen above that to accept homosexuality as a fact of life though not personally for me. No my problem here is who is what. I can't work it out. But then again if I have risen above it why should it bother me.
Perhaps I am not quite so enlightened as I thought.
A poem that gets me that introspective can't be all bad! Lol.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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I am consumed with curiosity to know what this latest news is that would have you not enjoying each other tonight. I have a sneaking suspicion that is something I'm not going to be told.
I am also suffering from gender problems here. Its not that I am homophobic, although I come from a generation that generally speaking is. I like to think I have risen above that to accept homosexuality as a fact of life though not personally for me. No my problem here is who is what. I can't work it out. But then again if I have risen above it why should it bother me.
Perhaps I am not quite so enlightened as I thought.
A poem that gets me that introspective can't be all bad! Lol.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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The news is they have both heard the gossip about their affair but they do not care. They are still going to continue on with it.
Comment from ProSongwriter
Brett ...
Had I a "sixer" remaining, you would certainly get it for this piece. I can'r remember having read a piece written about illicit love that was done so tasteful and with classic style. Nothing tacky or vulgar ... just the entwining of two hearts and two bodies needing what they can't get anywhere else, including at home.
A joy to read! Good luck in the contest ... reads like a winner to me!
Alan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Brett ...
Had I a "sixer" remaining, you would certainly get it for this piece. I can'r remember having read a piece written about illicit love that was done so tasteful and with classic style. Nothing tacky or vulgar ... just the entwining of two hearts and two bodies needing what they can't get anywhere else, including at home.
A joy to read! Good luck in the contest ... reads like a winner to me!
Alan
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Appreciate your comments and support.
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You are welcome ... it was a real pleasure!
Comment from honeytree
Very interesting art work for these words.
we are human beings and we remember many things
within our lives especially someone we loved
and would love to see the m again.
We can wish we can hope but generally
we don't see them again.
Great poem and words
Honey tree
I have no six
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Very interesting art work for these words.
we are human beings and we remember many things
within our lives especially someone we loved
and would love to see the m again.
We can wish we can hope but generally
we don't see them again.
Great poem and words
Honey tree
I have no six
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support welcome.
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Loved what you wrote so much
Honeytree
Comment from risktaker
Clear depiction of a couple participating in illicit sexual escapades. I feel the cravings and the addiction compelling the couple to continue their experiences. People find and take love where ever they can.The photo is effective. The imagery is clear and on point.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Clear depiction of a couple participating in illicit sexual escapades. I feel the cravings and the addiction compelling the couple to continue their experiences. People find and take love where ever they can.The photo is effective. The imagery is clear and on point.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Appreciate your comments and support.
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Thanks
Comment from anabellapongasi
The title itself is very suggestive of something. This poem sounds like a song about a forbidden love or an affair that's not supposed to be. It has a lyrical rhythm and the repeating lines work quite well. Best to you in your contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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The title itself is very suggestive of something. This poem sounds like a song about a forbidden love or an affair that's not supposed to be. It has a lyrical rhythm and the repeating lines work quite well. Best to you in your contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these Country lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is a very enchanting and enticing romance poem. The run of your thoughts and your word choices coupled with simple but flowing romantic phrases give this poem a work to be cherished. I love it.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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This is a very enchanting and enticing romance poem. The run of your thoughts and your word choices coupled with simple but flowing romantic phrases give this poem a work to be cherished. I love it.
ola thomas
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Always appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A beautiful romantic poem, beside the wrong setting of this relationship. The author made it something beautiful that's happening behind the door. Most of the time love happens behind the door also in legitimate relationships.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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A beautiful romantic poem, beside the wrong setting of this relationship. The author made it something beautiful that's happening behind the door. Most of the time love happens behind the door also in legitimate relationships.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comments and support.