I Can Do This
This is a contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from TheNecklace
Love the picture that goes with this very short poetry contest entry. My neighbor plays piano at her church every Sunday also. What a wonderful gift to be musical!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Love the picture that goes with this very short poetry contest entry. My neighbor plays piano at her church every Sunday also. What a wonderful gift to be musical!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the great review my friend. hugs, Teri
Comment from ruzu27
In this very short poem the reader learns about the lady with musical talent who plays the piano in church. The artwork you have chosen is very beautiful.
Oh, I remember when I was about ten, how great my wish was to be able to play the piano but I wasn't allowed to. My neighbor had an old piano and she didn't mind me trying to play on it. Then my challenge was to surprise my family at Christmas and play a Christmas song. For weeks I practiced to read music and counted notes to make sure that I could play "Silent Night, Holy Night" all by myself and I assure you it sounded like an orchestra to me.
Thank you for sharing your poem with us. I was able to go back to my childhood and remember the great Joy we all had.
Ruth
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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In this very short poem the reader learns about the lady with musical talent who plays the piano in church. The artwork you have chosen is very beautiful.
Oh, I remember when I was about ten, how great my wish was to be able to play the piano but I wasn't allowed to. My neighbor had an old piano and she didn't mind me trying to play on it. Then my challenge was to surprise my family at Christmas and play a Christmas song. For weeks I practiced to read music and counted notes to make sure that I could play "Silent Night, Holy Night" all by myself and I assure you it sounded like an orchestra to me.
Thank you for sharing your poem with us. I was able to go back to my childhood and remember the great Joy we all had.
Ruth
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Thank you my friend for this great review. I did take lessons but I play by ear mainly. I have been blessed. Glad you could go back to that time. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a lovely poem. This is the way to keep hands doing good rather than evil. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a lovely poem. This is the way to keep hands doing good rather than evil. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Hugs, Teri
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My pleasure
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
I am glad you are aware of your musical talent. It is the sign of a healthy self-esteem. Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is stunning. Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Hello :)
I am glad you are aware of your musical talent. It is the sign of a healthy self-esteem. Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is stunning. Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the great review. God bless. hugs, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
I wanted to take piano lessons as a child, but we were a poor family and I never go to take the lessons. I play a little now, enough for my own amusement or maybe amazement, I am not sure which. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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I wanted to take piano lessons as a child, but we were a poor family and I never go to take the lessons. I play a little now, enough for my own amusement or maybe amazement, I am not sure which. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the great review my friend. God Bless. hugs, Teri
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
That is a wonderful thing to do, sure wish I had you at my church.
A wonderful poem and my best in the contest to you. LOyd
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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That is a wonderful thing to do, sure wish I had you at my church.
A wonderful poem and my best in the contest to you. LOyd
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Thank you Loyd for your great review. God bless. Hugs, Teri
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You are very welcome, Loyd
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You are very welcome, Loyd
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Thank you
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My pleasure, Loyd
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My pleasure, Loyd
Comment from Just2Write
This 2/4/2 tells the reader so much about the poet in 3 short lines.
It is well written to the form and is very well presented.
Great work, Teri.
Rose.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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This 2/4/2 tells the reader so much about the poet in 3 short lines.
It is well written to the form and is very well presented.
Great work, Teri.
Rose.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you Rose for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
It is a good thing to have a talent that you can with your friend and neighbors. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good good read.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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It is a good thing to have a talent that you can with your friend and neighbors. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good good read.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you Charlie for the great review. Hugs, Teri
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You're welcome, Teri. Charlie
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a very tight little poem. Meets all the contest requirements and well worked out. Succinct and easy to follow. Nicely penned.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hi there,
This is a very tight little poem. Meets all the contest requirements and well worked out. Succinct and easy to follow. Nicely penned.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from royowen
That's very good Teri, I used to play and lead worship, but handed over to the young, one boy I taught guitar to, now plays guitar on the platform, which is nice, lovely 2/4/2 you've produced here, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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That's very good Teri, I used to play and lead worship, but handed over to the young, one boy I taught guitar to, now plays guitar on the platform, which is nice, lovely 2/4/2 you've produced here, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much Roy. Hugs, Teri
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Most welcome Teri