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Comment from Ulla
Hahahahahaha, Bill, now you have me laughing so hard that I can hardly write. Trump! and President!, yeah that must be a true antonym. Hehe Wonderful poem and great satire and good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hahahahahaha, Bill, now you have me laughing so hard that I can hardly write. Trump! and President!, yeah that must be a true antonym. Hehe Wonderful poem and great satire and good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Ulla, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Drew Delaney
Amen to that!
Even though I am not American, I can't believe the joke is still going strong. Lord, help us all. I never thought he would get in. So now what?
Drew
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Amen to that!
Even though I am not American, I can't believe the joke is still going strong. Lord, help us all. I never thought he would get in. So now what?
Drew
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Trump doesn't care about the Presidency beyond what he can personally get out of it as a businessman. He's got big plans in Russia so he needs Putin as a friend. He wants to change health care so he and rich friends can pay even fewer taxes yet get government aid for their business dealings. He doesn't care if he's re-elected because he's got what he came for and doesn't have to do anything but talk and do nothing (which makes him a good Republican).
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So sad! I feel for you people as a nation to have him running the show.
Comment from pipersfancy
Oh - My - God! I've nearly laughed my ass-o-meter off with this bizarre take on the Antonym prompt! Although Merriam-Webster would likely not agree... in my opinion, a better pair of antonyms could not be found!
Best wishes in the contest!
pf
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Oh - My - God! I've nearly laughed my ass-o-meter off with this bizarre take on the Antonym prompt! Although Merriam-Webster would likely not agree... in my opinion, a better pair of antonyms could not be found!
Best wishes in the contest!
pf
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thanks, PF, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from frogbook
Now that picture and this poem have been the highlight of my day so far. Very funny, a great portrayal and truer words not spoken.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Now that picture and this poem have been the highlight of my day so far. Very funny, a great portrayal and truer words not spoken.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thanks, FB, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Oh wow! This makes up for all the bad things you have ever done in your entire life. This is so good. I am very jealous. I am kicking myself for not being first with this great artwork. The image gives birth to so many snarky comments, my mind is on full overload, my head is about to explode. Wow! Wow! Wow!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Oh wow! This makes up for all the bad things you have ever done in your entire life. This is so good. I am very jealous. I am kicking myself for not being first with this great artwork. The image gives birth to so many snarky comments, my mind is on full overload, my head is about to explode. Wow! Wow! Wow!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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You are too kind, nomi.
Comment from BOO ghost
yeah, a lot of media said trump was way behind in the polls, like CNN. That survey was certainly bogus fake news. ha ha! Comical looking image up there. A Donald mini-me. BOO don't watch much news anymore. Hate to be deceived. Count your doubloon. BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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yeah, a lot of media said trump was way behind in the polls, like CNN. That survey was certainly bogus fake news. ha ha! Comical looking image up there. A Donald mini-me. BOO don't watch much news anymore. Hate to be deceived. Count your doubloon. BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thanks, BOO
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Anytime, bud!
Comment from rama devi
Well said. What a super creative and clever ANTONYM pair! Superb satire.
Indeed...he is so delusional one thinks he has made the whole country that way. This is expressive and timely. Good pun. Fine presentation. This is a good coinage:
egotistical beyond fiction
So true.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Well said. What a super creative and clever ANTONYM pair! Superb satire.
Indeed...he is so delusional one thinks he has made the whole country that way. This is expressive and timely. Good pun. Fine presentation. This is a good coinage:
egotistical beyond fiction
So true.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thanks, rd, for the positive review. Bill
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:-))
Comment from Thal1959
Don't want to be a meanie here, Bill, but Trump and President, while it may suit you personally, are not antonyms. Though I understand you feelings. I could have said the same thing about Obama in a poem, but I have decided that politics and politicians can only taint the art of poetry. Just my thoughts.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Don't want to be a meanie here, Bill, but Trump and President, while it may suit you personally, are not antonyms. Though I understand you feelings. I could have said the same thing about Obama in a poem, but I have decided that politics and politicians can only taint the art of poetry. Just my thoughts.
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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I understand your point. The satire of the words being opposite is implied.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Trump and President being antonyms. While I fully understand the sentiment behind this, the contest committee may disagree. After all, those two are the same thing (lol).
The picture is a bomb and put me in stitches.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Trump and President being antonyms. While I fully understand the sentiment behind this, the contest committee may disagree. After all, those two are the same thing (lol).
The picture is a bomb and put me in stitches.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, yt, for giving this a look. Hopefully the meaning will override the initial doubt.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Agreed! I wish I could had written this. I love the last part about fake news. Everyday, I feel a rising uneasiness to the POTUS as a POTUS. Thank you for having the guts to put this one for review. Would love to see more of this.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Agreed! I wish I could had written this. I love the last part about fake news. Everyday, I feel a rising uneasiness to the POTUS as a POTUS. Thank you for having the guts to put this one for review. Would love to see more of this.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Cy