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Comment from Jaq Cee
Well Michael my friend it's nice to come back on and see that you are still producing these cryptic and thought provoking words. "Tossed goes ancient wisdom", these words resonate. (if only I had learned from mine) Love and hugs, Jaq xx
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Well Michael my friend it's nice to come back on and see that you are still producing these cryptic and thought provoking words. "Tossed goes ancient wisdom", these words resonate. (if only I had learned from mine) Love and hugs, Jaq xx
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome back and hope you are enjoying Fall.
I found your fourth stanza memorable along with the mesmerizing parallel picture and your "at last is never too late". Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Welcome back and hope you are enjoying Fall.
I found your fourth stanza memorable along with the mesmerizing parallel picture and your "at last is never too late". Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Hey J.....well the falls the hardest part....survive that it's up hill from then on. I got the whole world in my hand....I got the whole world in my hand ...I got the whole wide world in my hand
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Keep on rolling the world around in your hand and survive Fall! Smiles- Joan
Comment from closetpoetjester
No, not much use going on if we don't have someone, somewhere or something for our heart to follow.
I love your minimal almost cryptic approach Michael...
My favourite lines
boyhood scattered about
Yes, youth has no wisdom LOL but hey, like you said
"at last is never too late"
I agree. Definitely better late than not at all.
Hugs Sassafrass
xx
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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No, not much use going on if we don't have someone, somewhere or something for our heart to follow.
I love your minimal almost cryptic approach Michael...
My favourite lines
boyhood scattered about
Yes, youth has no wisdom LOL but hey, like you said
"at last is never too late"
I agree. Definitely better late than not at all.
Hugs Sassafrass
xx
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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late is a date worth waiting for....unless shes a mind set of miss debbie reynalds.....then youll believe in God just to find explaination...whhhhhhhhy......-headtilt-....can i kiss your Sass....love Michael
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Indeed a date worth the wait.
Now can you kiss my wha--??
Oh, Michael!
But of course LOL
Thought you'd never ask
*wicked grin*
Comment from frierajac
i especially like the line' at last is never too late. I can't quite get the beginning
as 'even steven'? It is an interesting read even without the song attachment.
It ends on an upbeat note.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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i especially like the line' at last is never too late. I can't quite get the beginning
as 'even steven'? It is an interesting read even without the song attachment.
It ends on an upbeat note.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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why hello there...-smile-
I cant either... but I keep trying.
do you love me...?
aha...ah lets see "even steven"...nothing ventured nothing gained...if youve never lost how would you know what you dont have to win. if you or I take eye for eye who would ever see a difference. -headtilt-....well actually...Ive been busy....and my basic editor isnt working anymore...my scroll has vanished...and I'm too exhausted to find it...and I cant edit....so this is my in trance rough draft....I usually tweak it perfect....next time. love Michael
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Thank you, i have simultaneous issues. we 're even
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o yea....I...I dont have any issues...no yea...I'm not like the rest of these guys. -headnod-
Comment from MizKat
Hi reconciled,
Again you have written a very good poem.
I'm happy to read what you wrote about it too.
It was also nice to see Bruce Springsteen's picture.
Thanks for sharing what you've written to your friends.
Kat
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Hi reconciled,
Again you have written a very good poem.
I'm happy to read what you wrote about it too.
It was also nice to see Bruce Springsteen's picture.
Thanks for sharing what you've written to your friends.
Kat
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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well if I were to entertain all my friends I'd need an arena.....aha...-smile-...ello luv......why thanks to you...skip about as you please home is in your head. love Michael
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Hi Michael,
You've always been so wonderful to me.
I'm not sure how long I'll stay on here
as I'm getting forgetful about a lot of things. I never knew that I'd live to 80 years old.
Kat
Comment from Ricky1024
"Hey, nice to See You back....
"Been sliced open twice...
{Since you've been gone}
"And Tamed "The Lion."
With an Old Morrison Song!"
"Light My Fire!"
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"But, Life Moves on even for...
"Ancient Beings"
"Like Me!"
Depth Level a good Ten Stars.
Munch on More "Brain Food" even if you have to steal a "ZOMBIES!"
Dr. Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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"Hey, nice to See You back....
"Been sliced open twice...
{Since you've been gone}
"And Tamed "The Lion."
With an Old Morrison Song!"
"Light My Fire!"
...
"But, Life Moves on even for...
"Ancient Beings"
"Like Me!"
Depth Level a good Ten Stars.
Munch on More "Brain Food" even if you have to steal a "ZOMBIES!"
Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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ah hey Rick....-smile-
Ive been here and there...just not writing much.
jimi says its because I'm not in love....like she can spell that...aha...twice...? ouch...me too more or less. guys like just dont die Rick...its a bitch. love Michael