Holiday, Holiday
Song lyrics60 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
It's too bad that there isn't music to it. It's nice to read it, but to hear it sung with music would be grand!
I found one typo:
Trees lit up fancy neath (think it should be 'neath) stars in the sky (do your own research cause I may be wrong)
Good luck in the contest.
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It's too bad that there isn't music to it. It's nice to read it, but to hear it sung with music would be grand!
I found one typo:
Trees lit up fancy neath (think it should be 'neath) stars in the sky (do your own research cause I may be wrong)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from mvbrooks
What an intriguing image--deep colors contrasted against black--and the suggestion of the continents with embedded images. Sets a mood for the song.
The song is ideal for the Christmas season. Simple, playful, fun. The rhyme is consistent and makes the song easy to remember.
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What an intriguing image--deep colors contrasted against black--and the suggestion of the continents with embedded images. Sets a mood for the song.
The song is ideal for the Christmas season. Simple, playful, fun. The rhyme is consistent and makes the song easy to remember.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from kathleenspalding
Lovely song that I hope you are able to sell (for big bucks!) to some pop star who will make it a hit that is played world over. :-) Wonderful message, and I agree with you 100%! I see nothing to correct.
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Lovely song that I hope you are able to sell (for big bucks!) to some pop star who will make it a hit that is played world over. :-) Wonderful message, and I agree with you 100%! I see nothing to correct.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from DALLAS01
I think this is beautiful. Love the fact that it is all inclusive. I personally don't think that by saying Merry Christmas, it is a political statement, but rather for me, it is traditional. Thanks for sharing.
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I think this is beautiful. Love the fact that it is all inclusive. I personally don't think that by saying Merry Christmas, it is a political statement, but rather for me, it is traditional. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from Kerry Foley
These are wonderfully done lyrics on the hoildays, very warm and cheerful.
Nice job, my friend. Good luck! ~Kerry
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These are wonderfully done lyrics on the hoildays, very warm and cheerful.
Nice job, my friend. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from nbonner
What a joyful song which brings us into the new year. I like the first verse, 'we all have beliefs'. Thank you for sharing this joyful song. Happy New year. NB
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What a joyful song which brings us into the new year. I like the first verse, 'we all have beliefs'. Thank you for sharing this joyful song. Happy New year. NB
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from Zue65
The poem followed strictly the rules of the contest, the message is in keeping with the holidays. I beg to disagree with your views but it doesn't mean that you are less of a writer just because we differ in our views.Celebrating Christmas should never be construed as insulting other faiths as we Christians are also not insulted when Muslims celebrate Ramadan. God bless.
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The poem followed strictly the rules of the contest, the message is in keeping with the holidays. I beg to disagree with your views but it doesn't mean that you are less of a writer just because we differ in our views.Celebrating Christmas should never be construed as insulting other faiths as we Christians are also not insulted when Muslims celebrate Ramadan. God bless.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I like the idea of this this very much although sadly I doubt the human race will ever reach this point.
History shows us that man appropriates. All the major holidays are appropriated from what has gone before it seems.
If little small countries can't manage it, what hope the wider world?
But this song is an ideal, something to aspire to and in that it presents a strong and hopeful message.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
I like the idea of this this very much although sadly I doubt the human race will ever reach this point.
History shows us that man appropriates. All the major holidays are appropriated from what has gone before it seems.
If little small countries can't manage it, what hope the wider world?
But this song is an ideal, something to aspire to and in that it presents a strong and hopeful message.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from DR DIP
I really like this, I think it would work for sure. It has everything I am sure a musician with a good tune and guitar ability could make this work for sure. I wish I could play an instrument Thanks for sharing
dip
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I really like this, I think it would work for sure. It has everything I am sure a musician with a good tune and guitar ability could make this work for sure. I wish I could play an instrument Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Holiday, Holiday", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Holiday, Holiday", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017