Act of Endurance
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello
I read you poem and looked at your picture saying Life is but a dream is true when as you said in your poem
when Lies told by officials is
Pain of the heart
One should read you author notes to see why you said-
A hard belt hit, just (leaves) a bad memory.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello
I read you poem and looked at your picture saying Life is but a dream is true when as you said in your poem
when Lies told by officials is
Pain of the heart
One should read you author notes to see why you said-
A hard belt hit, just (leaves) a bad memory.
Gert
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Ain't no justice. Too many victims played by boards with their pretend rulers. Glad this write captured some interest. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
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You are mellow TPAC
Gert
Comment from Harry Smith
The poet drew me into this poem that is very well written with a picture is just outstanding and went perfectly with the poem. The reader really enjoyed the read and will be returning.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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The poet drew me into this poem that is very well written with a picture is just outstanding and went perfectly with the poem. The reader really enjoyed the read and will be returning.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Glad this write had pleasing aspects, the picture seems to be an added plus, conveying the helplessness often accompanied. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
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You are welcome