Comment from Anne B Francis

Excellent

A well written poem on loves sweet dream, that first look the secret of the soul cannot be hidden from true love and its emotions - so sweet the desire within the heart

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

So true, Anne. I appreciate your review and comment. Many thanks!

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

How amazing was Rodin's sculpture of The Kiss? From a block of marble comes beauty and a tale to tell. I love the best sculpture of David (Michelangelo) So many beautiful works of art came through those days when man was primitive compared with us today. Computers can't even get close to a man with a chisel. Brilliant my friend.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018

Ah - that depends on the man and on the chisel! I think I'll stick to the computer! LOL
It was wonderful seeing so many of Rodin's sculptures at one time and in one place. The garden setting in brilliant summer sunshine added an extra element of enjoyment.
All the best, Tony

Comment from Pam (respa)

Exceptional

-Very nice choice of artwork, Tony.
-Thanks for the author note, too.
-A well penned poem for the contest.
-I like how you balance the art
and love, and give examples
to show each, like the spires
and carillons.
-Art and life are then united
in your couplet, "renewed in Rodin's Kiss."
-I enjoyed this poem; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018

Many thanks, Pam, for your kind words and six stars. It was a real privilege seeing so many of Rodin's sculptures in one place while we were in Paris. The surreptitious kiss of the young lovers was an unexpected bonus!

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Jul-2018

You are very welcome, Tony. It must have been wonderful to see such art. How many countries did you visit?

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Tony,
A perfect subject for a poem/sonnet
I think the thinker's thoughts may have strayed
to this more fulfilling pose.
We have a Rodin museum in Philadelphia, too.
I've often written about balance being one
of the fundamental principles of the existence.
It good to read Rodin agrees.
Beautiful poem, wish I had a six left
Robert

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018

Thanks, Robert, for your supportive comments and virtual six. Much appreciated, as always. I didn't know that Philadelphia also has a Rodin museum. Interesting. All the best, Tony

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Your inspiration inspired me to sit and muse and read again...and ponder how strong the pull of art and passion are, and how magical when they fuse together in that mystical way of the arts! Lovely poem...I am so glad you shared it!

Karenina

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018

Thanks, Karenina. Seeing the effect that art has on people enhances my enjoyment of it. Somehow the art becomes more personal. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from trimple

Exceptional

Good evening, Tony

A superb piece of poetry, centred on, Rodin,s statue of 'The Kiss = the ultimate embrace. The magnificence and semblance of love are felt by your two lovers that are drawn towards each other, further, as they stand in awe.

Doesn't get much better than this, Tony. Bravo.

Creative word use and sound, meter.

All the best

Tracey

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018

Very many thanks, Tracey, for your enthusiastic review and six stars. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent poem using "The Kiss" by Rodin. Great imagery in this lovely love poem. I too have seen this piece in Paris and truly it is an inspiration.

Very nicely done Tony,
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018

Thanks very much for your review, Janet. The Rodin Museum was certainly inspirational and we were there on a perfect summer's day, so able to enjoy the garden sculptures at their best. All the best, Tony

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

Well . . . this is the definition of perfection and I have no sixes left to offer. This is very nicely done. I do not profess to give advice on something I am not capable of producing. This is exquisite! Very nicely done and good luck!
wendy

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018

Thanks, Wendy. I very much appreciate your enthusiastic review, good luck wishes, and virtual six. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

I really enjoyed how this work flowed so well and does a great job representing the photo as lovers inter twined. I wish you well in the contest and this seems like a strong entry.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018

Thanks, Michael. I appreciate your supportive comments and good luck wishes. All the best, Tony

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Tony,

I absolutely love this statue, and when I saw it in France, I wasn't disappointed at all. I used to have a replica, but it has gotten lost over the years.

Your poem was a beautiful tribute to this piece and truly belongs in the Love Poem poetry contest. Good luck to you,

~patty~

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018

Many tanks, Patty. It certainly is a lovely statue. I was lucky to be able to see so many of Rodin's works in the museum in Paris that is dedicated to them - many of them set in natural surroundings in the gardens.