Morning Serenade
A Gathering of Songbirds6 total reviews
Comment from His Grayness
I found this work to be exceptionally well done with excellent opening artwork/photography and all poetic work beautifully delivered with no recommendations for any changes at all! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I found this work to be exceptionally well done with excellent opening artwork/photography and all poetic work beautifully delivered with no recommendations for any changes at all! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The image is beautiful, Eugene.
-Did you complete this puzzle?
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of rhyme for
songbirds is effective.
-The imagery is good,
and the last line makes
for a very good conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-The image is beautiful, Eugene.
-Did you complete this puzzle?
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of rhyme for
songbirds is effective.
-The imagery is good,
and the last line makes
for a very good conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
Comment from Six-Star Writer
I wish I could hear these songbird melodies, too. Instead of the booms and bangs in my condo complex a t two in the morning.. I think there are a bunch of night owls where I live.
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I wish I could hear these songbird melodies, too. Instead of the booms and bangs in my condo complex a t two in the morning.. I think there are a bunch of night owls where I live.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Oh, this is beautiful, from illustration to words of music in the air. I love birds. I really like the rhyme in your poem. I especially love this: 'Sung with melodic ease
Dancing on the breeze'.
This is a great contest entry!!
Gale
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Oh, this is beautiful, from illustration to words of music in the air. I love birds. I really like the rhyme in your poem. I especially love this: 'Sung with melodic ease
Dancing on the breeze'.
This is a great contest entry!!
Gale
Comment Written 08-Jan-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet melodic and uplifting write about the songbirds that always bring delight to us, a beautiful presentation and I wish you luck with the contest, lov Dolly x
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This is a sweet melodic and uplifting write about the songbirds that always bring delight to us, a beautiful presentation and I wish you luck with the contest, lov Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming poem in its light and melodious presentation, both in verse and image. I would change one word to fit the theme of the poem, since the word" dancing" doesn't agree with the birds' activity. I suggest "crooning," which does and still retains the correct syllable count - fully compliant with the prompt...
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In my opinion, a charming poem in its light and melodious presentation, both in verse and image. I would change one word to fit the theme of the poem, since the word" dancing" doesn't agree with the birds' activity. I suggest "crooning," which does and still retains the correct syllable count - fully compliant with the prompt...
Comment Written 07-Jan-2019