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Touched

A Naani Entry

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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Good naani poem, Anonymous Poet.
Leonard Cohen once wrote, and I quote:
"I never learned how to feel so I learned how to touch."
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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Dean, for sharing your insights. It was only through her sense of touch that Helen Keller managed to break through her prison of isolation. Never underestimate the power of touch...
reply by Dean Kuch on 09-Jan-2019
    Anytime...
    ~Dean
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a wonderful Naani poem. Your message/topic of offering a hand to ease other's fear is well-written. "Never ending circle of love"...great wording to evoke emotion! I hope you do well in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thank you for your encouraging and supportive comments.
Comment from melodymavic
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I like your poem. A simple gesture such as holding hand melts away fear is powerful, especially holding hands with closest person you want to be with the rest of your life. This can apply to loved ones, family, close friends, and pets. Your poem reminds of a filipino song called "Haway Kamay" by Yeng Constantino. Hawak kamay literally means holding hand. You can find this song in youtube, if you're interested.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thank you stopping by to read and review my naani. Reaching out and touching others is a unifying force. It simply shows we care. Much needed in the world today.
Comment from dmt1967
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This poem touched my heart as it has so much insight. Love and warmth make pain and suffering better is a great message to preach. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thank you stopping by to read and review my naani. Reaching out and touching others is a unifying force. It simply shows we care. Much needed in the world today.
Comment from Insider98
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A unifying message. It sounds like great first step to end fear and love each other and everyone despite the differences. Excellent piece. Cheers
Insider98

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2019
    Thank you stopping by to read and review my naani. Reaching out and touching others is a unifying force. It simply shows we care. Much needed in the world today.
Comment from meeshu
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Nice Pic. This a very good Naani poem. this very short poem is excellent. You have done a fine job with this for the contest. good luck..

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
    Thank you for your input and positive feedback.
Comment from victor 66
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People who love, seem to have a happiness and sereneness that I would suspect others do not. An extended hand is hard to resist whether it's from a small child or an aged grandparent. A very nice Naani poem. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
    Thank you for your input and positive feedback. I appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
reply by victor 66 on 09-Jan-2019
    You are most welcome, June.