Comment from
24chas
I liked this read, TPAC. You really built up the emotion in this piece. An uncomfortable feeling of something about to happen that's not good. Nice job.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
A life in hell, thinking all endure such aspects some more perceptive to them, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from
meeshu
this is a very unnerving piece of writing, TPAC. you bring forth an unknown emotion, is it dread? is it anticipation? does fate have a face? excellent...................meeshu
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
My interests the state of the dead, seeing perhaps their flesh less souls living with us, thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.