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Even The Stars...

The heights of passion...

13 total reviews 
Comment from Gail Denham
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Hmmm - this makes me think - do stars have limits. Perhaps they do as they were put in place by God and they circle, glow or burn out on His command I think. Whereas we also have limits - moral restraints I believe. Still, your poem made me think. I so enjoy seeing a wide open sky of stars.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
    Thank you for reading and your review! I guess my perspective was that stars have physical limits, but the love between man and woman is a spiritual one having no limits! Passion, in my view, doesn?t necessarily have to be just about the physical encounter. Have a great weekend!
reply by Gail Denham on 05-Jul-2019
    Thanks for pointing that out and I agree - the current title of "love" is often misconstrued to mean intimacy. Not always true.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
    It has become that way in our society these days for sure, sadly!
Comment from Mark D. R.
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A very romantic presentation in verse and illustration.

Love may have unlimited boundaries. The scientists or physicists can inform us if the stars have their limits. LOL

Please consider adding a space before and after your dash in your last line. Methinks it will make for a better read for FS reviewers.

Good luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
    Thank you! This is my first try at a 5-7-5! Appreciate you enjoyed!!! xo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this highly romantic
piece, conveying the theme that true love is limitless. The artwork
is very lovely.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    Thank you for checking it out! Appreciate!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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I love how you beautifully described the height of passion being far above the stars, and you can say this because God Himself has set the stars in their place and within given boundaries. Beautiful artwork to match.
A great contest entry, and I wish you all the very best!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much! This is a first try for me! Your precious comment is greatly appreciated! Happy 4th!
reply by C. Gale Burnett on 04-Jul-2019
    You did great! Keep writing :)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    :) thank you!!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I always thought the star were the limit, but according to your write passion has no bounds! Quite right too, a wonderful write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    LoL! Oh how we poets can stretch those boundaries! Ha! Thanks very much for checking this one out!!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written romantic 5-7-5 poem, our passion has no limits but the stars do have limitations and cannot go where we can go without limits.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    Thank you for taking time to read and comment! Its quite a challenge to write an impactive piece within this limited structure!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-The use of stars is
a good one for a romantic poem.
-A good message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    Thank you for your time and thoughtful comment! Happy 4th
reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Jul-2019
    You are welcome, and have a Happy 4th, too!
Comment from Tootie
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Good choice of words for this and great message and presentation. Well done. I like the color choices. Your title drew me in. Wishing you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you Tootie! Appreciate your time and stars!
Comment from Raul1
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I like this poem because it's very romantic and well written. I see no mistakes in your writing. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! Nice work! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you for stopping to read and your precious comment!!
reply by Raul1 on 03-Jul-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Sheridan1
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This speaks of the human spirit, passion taking us beyond what we have conventionally thought of as beyond and above us - the stars. Unexpected conclusion. Delightful and surprising.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much! I appreciate your time and review! Happy 4th!