Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Perfect match of poem and picture. It seems like they are flying away from a storm that is ending.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019

Thanks for the review. I saw the first batch yesterday and love to watch them make that vee while noisily making their way south. Goodbye geese....goodbye summer. Cheers.

reply by dragonpoet on 17-Sep-2019

You're welcome. At least summer's heat is hanging on here. A little Indian Summer.
dp

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019

Let's hope so. My entire cabin is stacked on the porch under a tarp while I sand my maple floor...no rain..no rain..no rain. And while I am praying, nice warm Indian summer. Cheers

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I have seen this scene often in my hometown and you captured it in so few words here, goodbye summer and hello winter, I have been fortunate enough to fly with them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019

I am in Vermont all week sanding my maple floor, (arms like Popeye now ha ha) and saw the first batch fly over through the foliage. Barking cries and finding their space in line, keeps me amused for a few minutes. Yes, goodbye summer, snif.. cheers.