Royalty
Contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, ROYALTY, follows the vertical theme and introduces a new ruler to the throne as voices chant LONG LIVE the KING.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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This acrostic poem, ROYALTY, follows the vertical theme and introduces a new ruler to the throne as voices chant LONG LIVE the KING.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thanks for your review.
Better chant than "Down with the King" :)
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like the story that you told with this acrostic poem. I liked the way you displayed it too. It was easy to read and understand. This was well penned. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes. -January L.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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I like the story that you told with this acrostic poem. I liked the way you displayed it too. It was easy to read and understand. This was well penned. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes. -January L.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very unique offering for the contest in aabbccc rhyming acrostic - such a fun idea! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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A very unique offering for the contest in aabbccc rhyming acrostic - such a fun idea! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thanks for your review.
Much appreciated.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was solid. I can't suggest any improvements. It describes royalty pretty clearly. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good writing. This one was enjoyable.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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This was solid. I can't suggest any improvements. It describes royalty pretty clearly. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good writing. This one was enjoyable.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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I meant the 4th line for nippy. Sorry for the confusion. I know about cinquains and how they work.
Comment from ESOSTINE
You have the meaning of "Royalty" summarized in the word itself as in the world of acrostic poetry. "Years of training, heir at your birth" captures my interest. Good work!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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You have the meaning of "Royalty" summarized in the word itself as in the world of acrostic poetry. "Years of training, heir at your birth" captures my interest. Good work!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Kate Layne
You definitely met the mark describing royalty. Interesting layout that worked great with the prompt. It was an easy read that flowed well. Nice work!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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You definitely met the mark describing royalty. Interesting layout that worked great with the prompt. It was an easy read that flowed well. Nice work!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Raul1
This is completely how the royals live with very strict rules. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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This is completely how the royals live with very strict rules. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.