Beneath The Surface
25 Syllable Poem Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I remember when I was teaching 6th graders this issue. One of my students commented on Tammy Faye Baker's need to cover up truths. The mascot in the dysfunctional family has to work very hard to cover up the ugliness of the family. This is a good topic. I am voting for this.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
I remember when I was teaching 6th graders this issue. One of my students commented on Tammy Faye Baker's need to cover up truths. The mascot in the dysfunctional family has to work very hard to cover up the ugliness of the family. This is a good topic. I am voting for this.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and support, Liz. Yeah, way too many people deal with this problem I think. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Hope you have a wonderful day and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from oliver818
I really enjoyed this poem, it's very deep and loves up to its title very well. I guess we all feel like this sometimes, when life gets too much for us. We can only hide The truth for so long. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
I really enjoyed this poem, it's very deep and loves up to its title very well. I guess we all feel like this sometimes, when life gets too much for us. We can only hide The truth for so long. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Oliver. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer, so few words with such a great meaning and sharing of a condition that we all as humans deal The real us. We often try to impress or put on our game face but the real us is trying to burst out the seams. Great picture describing what your words are saying
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
Writer, so few words with such a great meaning and sharing of a condition that we all as humans deal The real us. We often try to impress or put on our game face but the real us is trying to burst out the seams. Great picture describing what your words are saying
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Mary. Yes, it seems we're all hiding something one way or another. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this little piece. I hope you have a great rest of your weekend.