Corn Moon
12 seasons haiku suite18 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
farmers harvest
by the brilliant moonlight
save for new tractor
Thank you for this delightful collection of poems for the entire year, a collection we can view all year long.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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farmers harvest
by the brilliant moonlight
save for new tractor
Thank you for this delightful collection of poems for the entire year, a collection we can view all year long.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing a bunch of my poems. I had fun with this one but was more challenging than usual.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a very interesting read! I never heard of Native American's each month having its own name and they are named very appropriately! I also enjoyed the scale at the end showing the picture of each moon. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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This is a very interesting read! I never heard of Native American's each month having its own name and they are named very appropriately! I also enjoyed the scale at the end showing the picture of each moon. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Patty. I hope you are doing well.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last,
I found this To be a very interesting read and I learned something new plus had a chuckle
That you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last,
I found this To be a very interesting read and I learned something new plus had a chuckle
That you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Your very welcome
Stay safe and God be with you
Cookie
Comment from equestrik
This is so creative. I love the moon and love the different full moons and what they represent. What a really fun way you have described them with a haiku for each.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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This is so creative. I love the moon and love the different full moons and what they represent. What a really fun way you have described them with a haiku for each.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twelve season haiku suite about each special full moon"s name and meaning when it appears in the sky at the certain time each month.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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A very well-written twelve season haiku suite about each special full moon"s name and meaning when it appears in the sky at the certain time each month.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, Sandra.
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Thank you very much, Sandra.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Gypsy,
This is quite a tour of some of my favorite moon images.
I love the way indigenous people related the moon
to the earth and the changing of the seasons.
Each of your wonderful haiku addresses an importance aspect of life.
A few minor suggestions:
wolf moon
hungry [wolf packs]
howl deeply till daybreak
mournful shadows
Snow Moon - (excellent cave image and contrast of snow and fire)
Worm Moon - love the dual image of of flower and worm emerging in early spring. Optional, you might drops "way" - worms wiggle out.
Pink moon - very good blue/pink:boys/girls connection.
Beaver moon suggestion:
traps are set
to catch beaver for their fur
warm winter
Winter Moon: suggestion drop "the"
its grip as [the] nights grow long
An impressive series, my friend, well done!
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Hello Gypsy,
This is quite a tour of some of my favorite moon images.
I love the way indigenous people related the moon
to the earth and the changing of the seasons.
Each of your wonderful haiku addresses an importance aspect of life.
A few minor suggestions:
wolf moon
hungry [wolf packs]
howl deeply till daybreak
mournful shadows
Snow Moon - (excellent cave image and contrast of snow and fire)
Worm Moon - love the dual image of of flower and worm emerging in early spring. Optional, you might drops "way" - worms wiggle out.
Pink moon - very good blue/pink:boys/girls connection.
Beaver moon suggestion:
traps are set
to catch beaver for their fur
warm winter
Winter Moon: suggestion drop "the"
its grip as [the] nights grow long
An impressive series, my friend, well done!
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your outstanding review and extremely helpful suggestions. I made the changes. Thank you for the six stars, Robert. I really appreciate it. Coming from you it means a lot to me.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Corn Moon", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. With craft and skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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"Corn Moon", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. With craft and skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and encouraging words. may you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy Blue Rose,
You're very welcome. I hope you have a wonderful weekend too.
God bless, take care and stay safe!
the Duchess
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Gypsy, I never knew these Native American moons existed, but thinking on that, the sun, moon and stars, have always had a part with most cultures in one form or another, brilliantly written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Beautifully written Gypsy, I never knew these Native American moons existed, but thinking on that, the sun, moon and stars, have always had a part with most cultures in one form or another, brilliantly written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, Roy, I appreciate your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from harmony13
This poem is so awesome! The author's words are descriptive, interesting,
educational and creative. I really like the pictures at the end with each
symbol. Thank you so much for the author's notes - they were filled
with facts and information. I enjoyed this read. The artwork is great!
Have a wonderful weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This poem is so awesome! The author's words are descriptive, interesting,
educational and creative. I really like the pictures at the end with each
symbol. Thank you so much for the author's notes - they were filled
with facts and information. I enjoyed this read. The artwork is great!
Have a wonderful weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, Maria, I appreciate your review and kind words. Good night. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from lightink
Such a delightful haiku suite, where you adjust your theme to the wisdom of the full moons - and their name in the farmer almanach!
love how you mixed a whole range of human experience into these: From mourning to humor...
"Save for new tractor' made me laugh
I adored the strawberry moon one - the red berries in the red moonlight
And smiled at the deer buck's seduction
So many emotions everywhere!
Thank you for this delight!
Warmly,
J
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Such a delightful haiku suite, where you adjust your theme to the wisdom of the full moons - and their name in the farmer almanach!
love how you mixed a whole range of human experience into these: From mourning to humor...
"Save for new tractor' made me laugh
I adored the strawberry moon one - the red berries in the red moonlight
And smiled at the deer buck's seduction
So many emotions everywhere!
Thank you for this delight!
Warmly,
J
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, Jyoti, for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy