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Writings From the Heart

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A book of Poetry & Writing

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Comment from Pili Pubul
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Deep thinking my friend, I am sure that many may identify. From my part I tottaly believe in...
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bend to the ever moving passage of age with conviction to the aspirations of what can be achieved, only to show true emotions with understanding to what is at hand,

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2010


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Comment from Addy García
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Your poem reflects the aspirations of every human being voces.s³lo silence to show the true emotions with understanding what is at hand
Many of us are identied with those words, thanks for sharing your work with us.
Congratulations, you receive a greeting from Mexico.
GARC?A ADDY

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2010


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Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
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A very pensive and strong narrative. Different strokes for different folks, but creativity sets us free from thoughts muddling up our mind. Keep on writing.
Dave

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2010


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Comment from Donna Thompson
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only to show true emotions with understanding to what is at hand, or live under the premise of whatever happens he will continue his journey with the conflict of never finding peace,

that really does sum it all up what a great poem well done

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2010


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