Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "The Friend"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from janian
love it! Dogs aresuch great animals.I like how you make all things level with everyone in this poem. wether your a doctor or worker,or an acter all is honorable. glory still awaits for you. awesome! great work , blessings much, janian
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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love it! Dogs aresuch great animals.I like how you make all things level with everyone in this poem. wether your a doctor or worker,or an acter all is honorable. glory still awaits for you. awesome! great work , blessings much, janian
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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thanks again jan
Comment from PUPA
Deepwater, as a dog lover(mine was a golden retriever), I appreciate your well written and interesting poem/prose. Being able to trust a friends matters more than anything else in this world, and I agree, they are very hard to find.
I enjoyed your writing very much.
Love
Pupa
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Deepwater, as a dog lover(mine was a golden retriever), I appreciate your well written and interesting poem/prose. Being able to trust a friends matters more than anything else in this world, and I agree, they are very hard to find.
I enjoyed your writing very much.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 25-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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thank you Pupa for reading
Comment from kintesiegel
i am a dog lover too big time so i appreciate the love you demonstrate. love is always a good thing, isn't it? the form is kind of cold maybe masculine but it takes away from the message a bit.
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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i am a dog lover too big time so i appreciate the love you demonstrate. love is always a good thing, isn't it? the form is kind of cold maybe masculine but it takes away from the message a bit.
Comment Written 25-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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thanks for the comments
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I get the message of this piece, and it is very punchy. We can only succeed or fail to the level that our friends and associates allow us to. The importance of a good friend is beyond doubt. kudos
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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I get the message of this piece, and it is very punchy. We can only succeed or fail to the level that our friends and associates allow us to. The importance of a good friend is beyond doubt. kudos
Comment Written 25-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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thanks for reading
Comment from Pili Pubul
I had a few dogs in my life, I am convinced that one in the entire world can love us more than a dog,completly unconditionaly. So I love your words and wisdom.
Our glory still awaits for you, One honor that is fair, Ah, here's a phrase that stands for much; a friend who stands there, It means that men have confidence eep at night Untroubled you may rest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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I had a few dogs in my life, I am convinced that one in the entire world can love us more than a dog,completly unconditionaly. So I love your words and wisdom.
Our glory still awaits for you, One honor that is fair, Ah, here's a phrase that stands for much; a friend who stands there, It means that men have confidence eep at night Untroubled you may rest.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you pili
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My friend , please be patient with me, I notice that I make many errors, perhaps due to my medications. Bu I wont give up, You very welcome.
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always my friend
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Thank you.:>)
Comment from Black-Saphire
I am a teeny bit lost, what did you mean in "And when you go to slIT"...? That sortof confused me but anyways, you did very good. You are a very accomplished writer, and i am very impressed with you :)
-Jade
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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I am a teeny bit lost, what did you mean in "And when you go to slIT"...? That sortof confused me but anyways, you did very good. You are a very accomplished writer, and i am very impressed with you :)
-Jade
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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sorry black i changed it was sleep...thanks Gary
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ohhh, that makes much more sense :)
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written poem without structure. It has a very smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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A very well written poem without structure. It has a very smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
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Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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thank you C for reading
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You're welcome, Gary.
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie