Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "As I wander through time and space"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
What a sweet picture of your mother and grandmother. What a wonderful memorial to them both! The love there can be deeply felt. I noticed one thing you may wish to correct
"little things in live" (Life?) Thanks for another meaningful writing! Love it! Betty
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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What a sweet picture of your mother and grandmother. What a wonderful memorial to them both! The love there can be deeply felt. I noticed one thing you may wish to correct
"little things in live" (Life?) Thanks for another meaningful writing! Love it! Betty
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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tank you for the comments and review
Comment from janian
This is richly beautifull!I got a tear in my eye!what a sweet memory poem!It makes me think of people who have passed through my life and have passed on.God bless you for writting this!fierce love to you and yours,janian
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This is richly beautifull!I got a tear in my eye!what a sweet memory poem!It makes me think of people who have passed through my life and have passed on.God bless you for writting this!fierce love to you and yours,janian
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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thank you Jan
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your welcome ,how've you been lately?
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still working offshore in the gulf till the end of the month
Comment from Ulrika
warm memories of a loved one can make a lovely poem, I feel you have captured an acceptance in her not being there but still take comfort in reflecting, Thankyou for sharing :)
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warm memories of a loved one can make a lovely poem, I feel you have captured an acceptance in her not being there but still take comfort in reflecting, Thankyou for sharing :)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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welcome Ulrika for the review
Comment from jwlee211
what a loving tribute to the ones you have lost. I like the tone your poem creates. You reach out to the reader in a very positive way. great work
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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what a loving tribute to the ones you have lost. I like the tone your poem creates. You reach out to the reader in a very positive way. great work
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
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thank you jw for the review