Comment from Connie P

Excellent

I'm terrified of what Bobby will do. He's looking for an excuse to hurt her and now that he's drunk he won't need one. If he finds out she's taken Michael to the doctor there will be hell to pay.
Note:*"He has an inflection*(infection) in both ears
Connie

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011

Thank you for catching that. Bobby will know that antibotics, so Anna took Michael to the doctor. She will pay for it, in a bad way.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It is a very rough marriage when one is mistreated and lives in fear. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, makiing for an easy read. Good job.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011

Thank you for your kind review.

reply by c_lucas on 27-Mar-2011

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, barbara, i really enjoyed this chapter, i hate to find out what's going to happen next but i'll have to wait til you post again. i'm sorry about the answer you found out, when do you start the radiation?

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 Comment Written 27-Mar-2011

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2011

I start radiation on April 6th and hormonal therapy in a week. Thank you for the kind review.