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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from jadapenn
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The stats are appalling. To think every 9 seconds a woman is abused. I can't handle this as I've never been in this position. What's with the men in the USA? Ugh, let me not get into anything. I bet half our women here suffer the same and you never hear about it. I liked this short chapter. Troy is making good progress and I hope he stands a good chance of winning this lady. Well done. luv jada

 Comment Written 01-May-2011


reply by the author on 01-May-2011
    Women all over the world are abused, not just in the US. I appreciate the kind review and your constant support.
Comment from Deejharrington
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A very well done chapter. I'm glad to hear that Anna isn't considering going back to her husband. Hopefully, Troy's father will have some answers and solutions. I'm sure Troy will make sure the two of them have a place to go.

I know the stats are horrible and hard to understand. Unless you've gone through it or witnessed abuse, its difficult to comprehend.
Excellent job on the chapter!
deb

 Comment Written 01-May-2011


reply by the author on 01-May-2011
    Thank you for your kind review and constant support. Yes, staying in that environment is hard to understand.
Comment from adewpearl
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You depict Anna's fears and regrets most effectively as well as Troy's genuine kindness - excellent dialogue along with Anna's inner thoughts.
It's so sad that many young people make one mistake that has so much lasting impact. Brooke

 Comment Written 01-May-2011


reply by the author on 01-May-2011
    Unfortunately is does. I wonder how many people wish they could take back an event in their lifes. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by adewpearl on 01-May-2011
    I hear so many people say, I have no regrets - Hell, I have regrets!
reply by the author on 01-May-2011
    I have tons of regreats.
Comment from c_lucas
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This pretty well sums up Anna's situation. I think Troy's parents will become foster grandparents in short order. Good job. You earned the six.

 Comment Written 01-May-2011


reply by the author on 01-May-2011
    Thank you for your kind review and the support you give me.
reply by c_lucas on 01-May-2011
    You're welcome, Barbara. Continue on your road to recovery. Charlie
Comment from Lostworld21
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I'm glad hope's getting stronger for Anna. This novel's a great read, the only one I regularly come back to! Write on :)

Absolutely loving it!

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 Comment Written 01-May-2011


reply by the author on 01-May-2011
    Thank you for the kind review and support.