Writings From the Heart
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Comment from drivenbackward
That's some deep thinking, deepwater. Looks like I finally made the connection with your name. To answer that question, why stress over it?
What contributions do we as mere mortals project for the salvation of this destiny. -- Do you intend to have a question mark here?
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That's some deep thinking, deepwater. Looks like I finally made the connection with your name. To answer that question, why stress over it?
What contributions do we as mere mortals project for the salvation of this destiny. -- Do you intend to have a question mark here?
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
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thank you for the reviw
Comment from adewpearl
compelling question that asks about the purpose of repopulating a world gone mad
I like poems that provoke debate and spur people to give their own answers
are we determined to rebuild the ark - a compelling image to focus this poem of social commentary on
Brooke
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compelling question that asks about the purpose of repopulating a world gone mad
I like poems that provoke debate and spur people to give their own answers
are we determined to rebuild the ark - a compelling image to focus this poem of social commentary on
Brooke
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
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thanks Brooke for the review
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi GW,
You make excellent points. Although, I believe our ark has sunk with too much greed for power and wealth, obscuring the need for peace and posterity.
Thought provoking piece.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')
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Hi GW,
You make excellent points. Although, I believe our ark has sunk with too much greed for power and wealth, obscuring the need for peace and posterity.
Thought provoking piece.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('-')
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
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thank you Jax
Comment from Pyrrho
If I could take one Tow guided missile back to prehistory I would carefully blow the ark to smithereens.
The fact that the ark survived is proof of god's fallibility.
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If I could take one Tow guided missile back to prehistory I would carefully blow the ark to smithereens.
The fact that the ark survived is proof of god's fallibility.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
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Thank you for your review
Comment from LIJ Red
Mankind, unfortunately, is not really any "better" or "worse" whatever that means. There are simply too
many, and space and goodies will be fewer. The strong and resolute will survive. The ark builds itself. Excellent thought provoking work.
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Mankind, unfortunately, is not really any "better" or "worse" whatever that means. There are simply too
many, and space and goodies will be fewer. The strong and resolute will survive. The ark builds itself. Excellent thought provoking work.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
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Thank you for your review LIJ