King Sawyer
a story poem in rhyming couplets115 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
Your marvelous imagination was certainly in overdrive in this one. What a delightful, fun, cute, and so clever poem about King Sawyer...he has the right idea! This is a wonderful story in a poem and a great entry for this contest. I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Your marvelous imagination was certainly in overdrive in this one. What a delightful, fun, cute, and so clever poem about King Sawyer...he has the right idea! This is a wonderful story in a poem and a great entry for this contest. I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Valerie - Sawyer loves his shoes and the minions from Despicable Me. LOL I appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This was a wonderful story in a poem, I enjoyed it hugely, you are so talented, the rhyme And the rhythm was one of the best I have read in a long time, really well done, good luck in the contest,
Andrew
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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This was a wonderful story in a poem, I enjoyed it hugely, you are so talented, the rhyme And the rhythm was one of the best I have read in a long time, really well done, good luck in the contest,
Andrew
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much for your generous response to my story poem :-) Brooke
Comment from granny goes viral
Do you have nothing better to do, then tickle me on a lazy Sunday afternoon? Well, you did it again. I hope you are proud of yourself! This is too cute, too well written for my mere silly comments It makes me wonder who this child is? What kingdom he rules?
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Do you have nothing better to do, then tickle me on a lazy Sunday afternoon? Well, you did it again. I hope you are proud of yourself! This is too cute, too well written for my mere silly comments It makes me wonder who this child is? What kingdom he rules?
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Granny - this child pretty much rules Encino already and now appears to be expanding his territory to the beaches :-) Brooke
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Comment from J. Dark
I absolutely loved this. It is incredibly cute and highly entertaining. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect (as always) making the piece trip of the tongue. A great story which makes it a worthy entry for the share a story in a poem competition.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :-)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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I absolutely loved this. It is incredibly cute and highly entertaining. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect (as always) making the piece trip of the tongue. A great story which makes it a worthy entry for the share a story in a poem competition.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :-)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Julie, thank you so much for your thoughtful reading of this poem and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from MelissaBickel
Brooke, seriously I'd buy a book of poetry you published of your children's poetry, well really any poetry. This is sweet, catchy, and the rhythm of it had me wanting to March around repeating this rhyme.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Brooke, seriously I'd buy a book of poetry you published of your children's poetry, well really any poetry. This is sweet, catchy, and the rhythm of it had me wanting to March around repeating this rhyme.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Melissa, thank you so much for your encouragement and generous sixth star :-) Brooke