Writings From the Heart
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Comment from kintesiegel
this is a sad poem that many of us can understand. But in a way you seem to have expressed an acceptance of things. anyway, this poem is full of emotion and feeling.
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this is a sad poem that many of us can understand. But in a way you seem to have expressed an acceptance of things. anyway, this poem is full of emotion and feeling.
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Thank you
Comment from c_lucas
Life is too short to fight over a mate. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Very good imagery.
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Life is too short to fight over a mate. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Very good imagery.
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Thank you for reading
Comment from Cindy Warren
How sad, sometimes it just doesn't last. Best to move on. I have to believe the right person is out there. I liked the last line. There's so much truth to it.
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How sad, sometimes it just doesn't last. Best to move on. I have to believe the right person is out there. I liked the last line. There's so much truth to it.
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Thank you
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi GW,
The artwork ties in very well with your poem.
I'm curious, I don't believe I've ever received a response back from you when I've reviewed your work. Is that your usual, or am I missing something?
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Hi GW,
The artwork ties in very well with your poem.
I'm curious, I don't believe I've ever received a response back from you when I've reviewed your work. Is that your usual, or am I missing something?
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Sorry jax if no responce but thank you for readi
Comment from adewpearl
good alliteration in first to face
I like the gone/on/gone rhyme
good alliteration in friends or fame
soulful expression of emotion
Brooke
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good alliteration in first to face
I like the gone/on/gone rhyme
good alliteration in friends or fame
soulful expression of emotion
Brooke
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Thank you Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
Such a sad story in this poem. Sounds like what I went through one time in my life. You just know it's over, it's just a matter of time.
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Such a sad story in this poem. Sounds like what I went through one time in my life. You just know it's over, it's just a matter of time.
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Thanks for the review
Gary
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is lovely, if not tragic; sometimes it's not easy to let go, yet always, a clean break is easier on the heart. We hang on, hoping things will change, but they rarely do.
A beautiful, touching poem, wonderfully presented.
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This is lovely, if not tragic; sometimes it's not easy to let go, yet always, a clean break is easier on the heart. We hang on, hoping things will change, but they rarely do.
A beautiful, touching poem, wonderfully presented.
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Thank you Dawn
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from daeneam
Yes... it is better to have loved and lost, than never loved at all. This was my favorite quotation during my high school days when I was beginning to have a crush. This is replaced by: If you love somebody, set him free. If he comes back, he's yours. If he doesn't, kill him. LOL c", Mae
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Yes... it is better to have loved and lost, than never loved at all. This was my favorite quotation during my high school days when I was beginning to have a crush. This is replaced by: If you love somebody, set him free. If he comes back, he's yours. If he doesn't, kill him. LOL c", Mae
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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LOL thanks for reading
Gary
Comment from Christopher Lones
That's pretty cool. I think it's about a girl trying to get over a guy that left her right? Or is it about a guy that died? Or something else?
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That's pretty cool. I think it's about a girl trying to get over a guy that left her right? Or is it about a guy that died? Or something else?
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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its what you want it to be
Gary
Comment from DanielEkine
A floral artwork.
Sometimes, we have to face the truth and reality.
When it is over, it is really over. Friendships and relationships do end, even if we don't what them.
"gw" your signature style is unique.
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A floral artwork.
Sometimes, we have to face the truth and reality.
When it is over, it is really over. Friendships and relationships do end, even if we don't what them.
"gw" your signature style is unique.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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thank you for reading
Gary